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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 Aw, reading that made me smile. Steve’s a much better person than I’ll ever be. Also I think he’s earned Dante’s eternal respect and loyalty.😄
Dante
Steve set Dante slowly onto the ground.
“I don’t just give everyone one chance.”
Dante stared up at him.
No. This was the part where the fight was supposed to b…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 11 months ago
You made me laugh… no, you guys aren’t the giants…it’s my own fears and insecurities. 😀 Alright, I hereby resolve:
On Monday, November 28, I will start a topic for the first part/chapter of Overcome for all your thoughts and critiques.
Thanks girl! @starofthrnorth you too! You’re helping me to expand my horizons!…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 11 months ago
Hello! I would like some ideas on this scene.
Background: Christopher and Briana used to like each other, but then they got captured and Briana blamed it on Christopher. She is trying to convince herself that she hates him, though she still likes him. Christopher loves her, but he hates her for hating him. (does that make sense lol?) Currently…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
Ooh, what’s your WIP about? That’s great that you discuss adoption, I think there need to be more books about that.
I can’t seem to figure out how to quote your post, but anyway, I might post some scenes from A Dream Come True in the next couple of days and ask for advice or suggestions!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
Yay! Thanks!
Yeah, the wait is thinking. I usually have it italicized, but didn’t want to go through the whole thing and re-italicize after I copied it. And I forgot. Does it make more sense with it italicized?
Ooh, yay, I’ll have to go read it!
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Erica replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
No, it is not part of the Green Ember. (Those are good too!)
Lol, good to know! 😀
I hadn’t even thought about toothpaste. Shows how much we take for granted, right?
I echo everything you said.
@everyone
Happy Thanksgiving!
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Light replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
First of all, thank you so much for creating this topic! It’s so good to see more people in this world thanking the Lord on thanksgiving.
I’m thankful for my family. My family has gone through some hardships this past year or two, and I’m so grateful for our Heavenly Father helping us get through.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So after several KP deletings and accidental refreshing the pages, I FINALLY typed this! Sorry it took so long😅🤦🏻♀️.
Oh okay! I like the name Everly better too😊. Whoa, a trap door?! Our poor charries😅😬.
Matthew
Me and Carter leaned, hands on our knees, panting.
I looked over at Carter. Smiled, “I t…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
It is! I read it yesterday . . . Are the others in the series good too?
Lol I suppose they are.
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Erica replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yes, I’m encouraged so much by the hope God gives us just when we need it. I don’t know if you’ve read The City of Ember (I forget the author lol), but basically the people are trapped in an underground city and the lights are going out. There is a group of people referred to as the “Believers” who are always smiling and singing and…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
The LOTR soundtrack is great! I like Concerning Hobbits too, but my favorites are The King of the Golden Hall and all the Rohan themes. (Big Eowyn fan here!)
Ooh, questions!
1. I like my character Ruby from Swallowtail Summer. She’s not at all like me, but she’s very interesting to learn about as I write her! I also like…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I finally finished chapter seven! I’ve been falling behind, but now that my schedule should be clearing up a little I’ll be able to catch back up. I’ll post it here if you want to read it.
5:30. The concert was at 7:00. He would have time. Milo dropped his satchel and fell into the Synthesis Pod trying to forget about his…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Hey!! I thought it would be fun to have a topic where we can share things we’re thankful for from the last year.
For me, one of the big things is recovery from Covid. (I love how this says “Covid” isn’t a word lol) My family was very sick–I had to go to the ER twice. But God brought all of us through.
More generally, I’m thankful for the…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Alright, my two weeks of incredible busyness are over! I can finally actually join this. Sorry its taken so long!
I’ll throw in my character Elissa with the sister squad even though she isn’t a sister. She has Eastern-Asian features and is most definitely an extrovert.
Milo
“Are you sure it…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone
Imma do the boys now too
Simon and Carter
“They were right here.” Carter said for the tenth time. He and some others had pressed every stone in the wall, hoping to find the button that had opened the floor before, but with no luck. Now, he was on his hands and knees, trying to pry open the…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Beth
The door opened to reveal another girl with her arm in a makeshift sling.
“What is with everyone around here hurting their arms?” Beth muttered.
“Hi! I’m Carmen!” Carmen said with a smile, peeking over Everly’s shoulder at the girl. “Hey, you match Everly here with your sling! You could be sling…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
🤣 Good thing your dad is a good cook! just kidding! That’s a fun memory and a great conversation starter!
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 11 months ago
I finally got around to reading this and I love it! Can’t wait to read more! Also the perspective on that drawing is amazing 😍
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Felicity replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
I think squids are cool. (and yummy 😳, poor squidy)
Ewww! They might be fun to look at but to eat..! ;D Have you really tried them before? You must be brave! I know people eat lobster, crab, clam, etc but I never heard of squid. Maybe I’m just close-minded. I mean, the only sea creatures I would eat are fish. :):)
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