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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
🤣🤣🤣 I don’t know what I’m doing
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Elissa
One of the girls wrapped the man in a hug, saying, “Oh you poor thing!”
What was happening? She hadn’t heard what he had said, but Elissa assumed it was bad based on the group’s reactions. She should do something. But these people were all strangers. In a weird…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Those Barret cats are awesome 😂😂🤣
Love it!
Haha, yay! Maybe I should draw a new and improved version someday 😂😂🤣🤣
Lol, thanks! 😁😊
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Lol you recognized the brainchildren! 😂🤣 I wasn’t sure if anyone would catch that! It’s some really early foreshadowing, I don’t expect anyone to figure it out though, it’s a bit too early.
Lol, yeah, I noticed! 😂😂
Idk if you remember, but in chapter one Lesli tells Tauren her parents got divorced, that’s the scene where he’s…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Hey if yall are interested heres some of my story!
Yaas! Ready to read more! 😁
“Oh.” Keiryn gets up and starts walking to his room. “—I’ll just do it by myself then.”
“Like always.” He says with an exaggerated sigh, swinging the door shut behind him.
Haha, poor Keiryn 😂 I feel the pain though, no one in my house can help…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
I think part of it is that the Dickinsons are mean people to start with,
Yeah, that would do it 😂😂
I stared at him through the darkness. “What does that mean? Are we royalty?”
😲😲😲 what? whoa
So the Dickinsons accepted–Corwin was still a prince after all–but as Aedan and Elinor get older, the Dickinsons grow to hate them. So there’s…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I didn’t know about plagiarism yet.
Ah, plagiarism 😐
I still have drafts of my next book (which was awful as well, but not plagiarism at least) which I might share tomorrow.
Eh, no plagiarism is definitely a step up. I’d love to see it! 😏😏
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
and mostly about orphans (of course)
The orphan thing is real. I did it too. A lot 😂🤣
but it is on paper…and y’all, I didn’t even know how to do paragraphs when I wrote this lol!! The “chapters” are short one page paragraphs and…there might be 10? 12? Idk…but yea!
Ugh, that’s what I did too. 😩 It would all be one big paragraph. I…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
I agree, Boromir was originally a good guy, though he did get corrupted by the Ring. But he repents and dies a very noble death, in true tragic hero fashion.
YES! Yes, this exactly. And I love his relationships with Aragorn, Faramir, and Merry and Pippin
I haven’t seen the movies
They are wonderful!! 😁
it just seems like they completely c…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 11 months ago
Ehh–actually I don’t. Quite. Yet.
Understandable 😂😂
Hmm, I don’t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don’t know. But basically the plot is
Okay, cool! I love fantasy, probably my favorite genre. And naw, it doesn’t sound silly.
And a disclaimer: though I do write about “magic,…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
(lol I have a lot. I saved everything from when I was little)
Haha, same! And even though they all sat and did nothing for a while, I’m glad I can bring them out into the open now. Beware, they’re a little dusty.
I think I was about 7 when I wrote this story. My dad lovingly typed it for me and I sent it to all my relatives for Ch…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Haha, I like it! And as @mineralizedwritings said, it’s pretty good for old writing. Just those couple of spots of over-description. 😁😂
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
Here’s some, but there are far more from where it comes fromI realized that not all of them have a baret, but they all have a very curly mustache
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I’ve written without a plot before, I just find myself better at the coming up with the story part than the actually writing it part. Like I can imagine it the words are just bad. I’ve definitely gotten a lot better, though. Practice!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Elissa (I didn’t actually think about how old she was exactly 🤣 but she’s around the same age as Milo, so 26)
Elissa woke in a massive, dusty bed. Very dusty. She sat up with a sneeze and looked around the room. The bed she was laying in had dark red blankets, sitting on a dark…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Sadly I have discarded the really old stuff, I’m curious what it was. I shredded my diary in like 4th grade, really disapionted I wanna know what was in there 😭😭😭 Like I wanna read it again sooo bad. Just imagine the pure cringe of younger me writing about a crush like I want to read it!!!
Haha, yeah, it’s always sad when t…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Do Your Worst Variant (Let's share our old, and probably bad, work) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
😀😁😂🤣😃😄😄😆😅😉😎😎😎
This is so much fun
🤣🤣🤣😛😛😛Thanks! I’d wanted to write for awhile before, I simply had no plot. I did like hearing my sister tell me about her story though and I’d give little ideas here and there. I could always do descriptive writing, but never had a plot.
I’m kinda the opposite. I have a lot of ideas in my…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yeah practicing on drawings you don’t like is a good idea 🤣
Lol, yeah 😁😏😏
Like open a window they are pretty bad 😂
Ohho, this is not the time of year for that 🤣😂 I’ll just put on a sweater and let my family suffer
The blending marker I’ve used is a prismacolor marker, and although it doesn’t have the same effect as a blendi…
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