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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rBAut0ZPBW1GiJ7QXjwNkgFf4EeE3pEt73XakZUKIR0/edit?usp=drivesdk
Guys, this is it 😱 The fifth chapter. I might upload more to my home page so I don’t bog anything down on the novel critique forum, so if you want me to tag you for updates, just let me know! I don’t want to bug anyone 💕 Thank you all again!! I have…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j THANK YOUU!!! That makes me so happyyy!!! Yes! I’m working on it now!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Take your time though <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Awww thank youuu!!! That literally makes me sooo happyy. Honestly, I don’t mind sharing more chapters, I just don’t want to fill the critique forum with a whole novel loll. If you want though, I could just share it to my home page? Idk, I just don’t want people to open up the novel critique section and see nothing but my book XD
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
……… I think this was the best chapter so far…….. SOOO goooood, but really sad!! And I adore the description and suspense. You also used all 5 senses, which brought the chapter to a whole other level. The mystery, intrigue, beauty… I’m sooo ready for the next chapter!! 💛💛💛 (is that going to be the last one? that’…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!! I’m trying to make myself write a haiku a day, but I always end up forgetting, so I’m going to try doing this for ten days and see if it helps lol.
That makes me really happy to hear you say that!! I’ve loved writing it so far!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Yay!!
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-vbhn_QpzMJ_xlGO1Sb6epYzGJIB0HY55BwPVctj3Dk/edit?usp=drivesdk
@anyone-who-wants-to @nova21 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j
After this I’m planning on putting up one more chapter. Thank you to everyone who stuck with me on this!! I’m so grateful to y’all!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j I will!! It’s up right now, and I’m about to add the next one as well <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
to reply to your question on another topic, I might publish my book, I haven’t really thought about, lol!! probably, if it’s good enough. 🙂 Oh, and #1 is called Lioness (for now) and #2 is As Dark As Mist & Shadow.Â
Thanks, that means a lot!! ❤
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ella replied to the topic I can’t figure out some cool names for my character! in the forum Characters 5 years, 2 months ago
If it helps you, go for it!!! I think it’s a cool idea, maybe she can do both? Or if not, than mind reading’s pretty awesome by itself!! 😄
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Girl, that was great!! Super fun to read, as always! 😉
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Thanks, girl!!! ❤
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
It’s good!! I only write about 250 words today, but I finished plotting for one of my POVs, so that’s nice. Just gotta finish the other POV, then I’m all done with that! I just made a word-count goal, which is 75k by the end of the year. Pretty loose, but we’ll see how it goes… 🤞
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ella replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Ooo, cool!! I love the sound of your WIP? (btw, have you heard of/read Dust by Kara Swanson? I think it’s a peter pan retelling and the author is actually from another christian writer’s forum called Story Embers, which is pretty cool!) And yes, agreed, tea is superior. 😄
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ella replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Haha, yeah, I’m probably dreaming about rocking in heels, lol!!! Ooo, I love satire!!!
Oh, oops, I meant plotter and pantser, but i wasn’t really paying attention to what I was writing… again, lol!!!
LOL, my dad has a taco shirt like that actually!! Ditto, tho, tacos are the best.
Yep, caffeine is a writer’s bff. Wel…[Read more]
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