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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello Fellow Writers! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
Awesome! I hope you can. Who is your favorite Character so far? Mine is Legolas. And all the other elves. 😛 I love Aragorn and Gandalf and the hobbits and pretty much everyone else too though.
Why thank you! I can get really riled up about them… *facepalm* lol Oh, that’s fun! I act scenes out in front of the mirror… It looks a…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Here’s an excerpt from one of my WIPs. It’ll get rewritten, and I had to edit it before I posted it, but here it is anyway. 😀 (Just to clarify, Ember is a dragon😉)
Ember turned her attention back to the motionless girl, lowering her head and blowing gently into her face. Creare gave a gasp, choked, and began coughing intensely. Her whole bod…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@nova21 @devastate-lasting @issawriter7 @daisy-torres @writerlexi1216 @jodi-maile @gracie-j @joelle-stone
Wow, those excerpts were great, ya’ll!
And thanks for tagging me, Ella. 🙂
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ella replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Great job!! You did AMAZING!!! Keep on writing awesome school projects, woohooooo!! 😆 And tysm for the compliment. 🙂
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ella replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Alright, I’m signing out! From :00-:30, I wrote 421 words and my last sentence is:
I expected this, but at the same time, I didn’t.
Hope your writing went AMAZING!!! 😃❤
Aw thanks, have too much fun with your family!! 😃
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ella replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
I’m down!! Starting in three minutes at :00 with you!! 😃😃
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello Fellow Writers! in the forum Start HERE 5 years ago
How fun!
Wow, now that you mention it, she does sound like something from a book, especially since she was a rescue horse. 🙂
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@gracie-j LOOK AT YOUUU!!! That snippet is FANTASTIC!!! I’m in such a reading slump right now but I need to read Held Captive XD This sounds so fantasticcc. That’s SUCH an awesome illustration <3
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@joelle-stone Ohhh that sounds so intruiginggg! I love the question of forgiveness posed throughout your snippet. Fantastic job!!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@issawriter7 OHH that’s so GOOD!!! I looove that answer. That’s a whole message right there XD
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@writerlexi1216 Yours sounds so good!! I love the glimpse into his struggle here!!!
@abigail-m Oh woww. I loveeee that line about the trees, not to mention the ice!!! It’s so vivid!!
@devastate-lasting OHH that was amazing, I’m hooked XD That last sentence really sealed the deal!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Oh, I just realised I misunderstood XD I thought we were doing blurbs lolll.
Here’s an actual excerpt :))))
I was a breathing dead man.
Th—Thump. Th—Thump. Th—Thump.
My heart thudded in my chest like an executioner’s drum. I could just feel the poison working through my blood, slowing my heart and making every beat feel intense and slugg…
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
@nova21 Oooh that’s a great idea!! I LOVE yours! It intrigues me right away!!! Thanks for the tag girl! <33
Here’s mine from Era of Shadows (an Alice in wonderland retelling):
❝Beware of what hides in the Shadows.❞
We’ve all heard the stories.
We’ve all known the rhymes.
We’ve all been taught of the girl named Alice who fell down a rabb…
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Character Chat! in the forum Characters 5 years ago
@keilah-h Oh how cool!!! Haha, she sounds amazing XD I’m like Nyx internally, but externally, I tend to be more reserved XD My character Nyx sounds completely different from yours though XD She’s more calm and day-dreamy, but she can be very talkative if the right subject comes up XD It’s so cool that your story centers around dinosaurs! Is it set…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
WOOOWWW!!!! That’s soooo good!!! I love how you set the scene and it’ sooo mysterious! I want to read more!!!!!!!
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Welcome Joelle!! If you need help, I’d gladly give some!! just let me know what you have in mind. (No one’s really on here recently, sadly. I’m gonna try to get it back up and running… )
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-…[Read more]
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ella posted an update 5 years ago
@devastate-lasting Hey Lin! How’s life? Are you ready for school to end yet? 😄 Four weeks left for me–how did this happen? 😱 Crazy. Anyways, how’s your WIP going? Mine’s great. I’m a little over 20% finished with my Camp NaNo project. I hope you’re hanging in there!!
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Hi Ella! Thanks for checking in; I believe I end somewhere in June, but yeah, I’m really ready for it to be done with. My WIP…haha, falling behind. Trying to catch up. Doing a ton of planning for future works. And yep, barely hanging by a thread.
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Aw, you got this girl!! All your stories intrigue me SO much–I mean, mafia, crime, mystery, time travel??? What’s not to love!!! 😃❤ Don’t stress over the word count, or the due dates, or high expectations (all of which I do even though I shouldn’t). Just take it slow if/when you need to and remember that you have a gift and that God gave it…[Read more]
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Thanks Ella! Yeah, I’ve been trying to be more lenient on myself with deadlines, trying not to push myself to finish the thing I promised for NaNo, instead focusing on plotting things I want to do next year, and working on this hand-written thing… I’m so glad someone likes my ideas! It makes me want to go write, haha….
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Please DO go write!! I mean, that one short story you let me read, about the girl on Halloween… I just like had to sit and let it sink in for a minute. It was SO good.
And the time travel one, about the boy trying to prevent his parents’ death??? Ahhh, so mind-bending and amazing!! And trust me, I’m a blunt person, and I don’t lie about…[Read more]-
*deep blushing* You sure know how to lay on the compliments…if you ever want to read another short story, I’ll send you the link *cough cough* Your words really mean a lot to me!
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I’d LOVE to read it!! Please send it this way! 🙂
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/yanhua_16433603005917105
Published at about this time last year…please enjoy!-
Awesome!!
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Let me know what you think! (❁´◡`❁)
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It was SOOO good!!! I left some comments and a review. You are an amazingly poignant writer. The description, character building, the clear writing style… AMAZING!!!
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Thank you so much for reading! Your words and support mean so much to me! I’m really really glad you enjoyed it! I hope I can keep on writing good things… (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
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ella posted an update 5 years ago
@ilena-louise Hey Ilena! Your name is GORGEOUS btw!!! Just wanted to check in and see how you’re doing. Just curious, but what genres do you write? I write dystopian/mystery/thriller/suspense/speculative (wow, that was a mouthful!). Anyways, hope you’re hanging in there!!
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Hi Ella! Nice to meet you!
Thanks, I like my name too, lol.
What genres do I do? Hmm…I prefer fantasy, I guess I like the whole worldbuilding process, crafting its history, creatures, languages, and stuff, but I love writing a good ole western too!
Oooo, you write thrillers and suspense! I’ve never written one, but I’ve always wanted to. XD…[Read more]-
Haha!!
Ooo, I love fantasy too!! I’m writing a WIP about a girl who’s trying to save her sister from a dangerous engagement which will ruin her, as well as trying to survive in a hostile world. It’s called As Dark As Mist And Shadow.
Westerns! Have you ever seen True Grit (the movie)? It’s really good.
My current WIP is a…[Read more]-
You can read the synopsis on my profile. 🙂
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“As Dark As Mist And Shadow…” I love that title!! The story sounds interesting too!
I’ve watched the 1969 version of True Grit, but I have yet to watch the newest version. 🙂
Both of your books sound super interesting! I read you’re synopsis on Spirals, and you have officially piqued my interest!!
Good luck with your writing, and may your la…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Awesome Poll: Mystery/Thriller Book COVERS!! 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years ago
Golly gumdrops!
(just kidding, i totally don’t say that cuz i’m way too cool… 😆)You go girl, you’re already published? That’s amazing, where can I find your pic books?(I’m great, btw. Just did a run and work out after my writing and had an amazing, healthy hamburger salad by courtesy of mi madre… 😄)
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