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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Thank you so much for reading!! I really appreciate all your comments!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@nova21 Yayy!! Thank you so much!! I’ll try to! I have a few chapters in progress rn, so maybe I’ll get them out before too long!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
<@nova21 Yay!!! Thank you so much for reading!! <3 (Haha understandable!)
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
It’s going pretty good! I started Chap. 3 of Lioness and it’s going pretty well. About to send in my chapter to KP Critiques… 😃
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
That was really good and super suspenseful!!! I love Tessa’s personality and internal monologue, too, lol!! You HAVE to post more—please!!!!!! 😃
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Ooo, I LOVE this!!! ❤ It was funny in the beginning and really intense at the end, which I love! And I like Tessa’s character, and of course, the antique roadshow guy. Overall, it was really well written and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!! (which might be awhile because I’m pretty busy today, so….) Thanks for sha…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
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Smoke and Mirrors
I panicked.
I jolted from the couch, blood rushing in my ears as I held the fork like a weapon. I was too frightened to even notice the small dribble of steaming broth that was running down the side of the bowl and over my hand. I quickly sat the hot bowl on the floor.
Stepping sideways, I kept my eyes trained on the…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-l Thank youu!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Okay, I’ll have to do that! Thanks!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
Okay so same with the tragic lives, and this character went through a lot to get there, but probably my girl Catherine, because she’s a cyborg and can shoot guns out of her arm among some other stuff XD Annnd she’s super strong.
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 2 months ago
Just came up with this on a whim and thought I’d stick it here!
In the woods.
In the meadow
in the woods
listen softly
to the woods
there’s a widow
crying there
and there’s a son
lying there.
In the meadow
in the woods
Listen closely
to all who told
for silver and gold
sing a melody
in the meadow
in the woods.
Sleep now…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting I loove the short little stanzas you always add as your signature!! This one is soo pretty. Where did you find it?
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-m Ooh that makes me so happy to hear!! Thanks!!
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@devastate-lasting Yay!! Thank you <3
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Daisy Torres started the topic Smoke and Mirrors Prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
Hello! I started a wip and was wondering if anyone would mind critiquing it for me? I’m trying a different style than I normally do and just wanted to see if this would work! Thanks <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Q9H-uDnPKm-adbMKRGzGKxnrTwnwyBJwrmqT9O0Sl0/edit?usp=drivesdk
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ella replied to the topic You get to be one of your characters for a day. Who would you be and why? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 2 months ago
Ooo, fun idea!! Let’s see… None of my characters in Lioness are very fun/nice/not-scarred (heh heh 😬), so I’d probably be someone from As Dark As Mist and Shadow. I think I’d be Murin, because she’s an awesome spy with an awesome sidekick who lives in an awesome place with an awesome attitude. And she rides horses all the ti…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Congrats!!
Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh. My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!! I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Wings First Three Chapters in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@e-k-seaver No problem! Haha yes, I saw them. I kind of got busy lol. I’ll get to them soon! Thanks for telling me!
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ella replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
I love this sooo much!!! Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉 To answer your questions,
1)Â I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!
2) Yes, I would!!! I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?
3)Â I think the pacing is great!!
Great job!!!!! 💛
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