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@keilah-h @theloonyone

Aurivis

“You have other magic users in your world?” Feather asked. “In my world there are several types….to be honest, I have a few simple powers myself. The ones from my world have created structures and buildings like this…but I don’t think it was one of them.”

Different kinds of magic? Aurivis thought. These humans and…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

sorry this took forever!

Eddie

As Eddie’s drowsiness faded, her desperate need to find her sister grew.

“Ellie! Els!” Her voice had tired out from calling her sister’s name over and over. There was still no Ellie. She stopped and slumped against a wall.

Where is she? Is she alone, too? Is she with Dante? Would he hurt her if…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Serin is really cool, by the way. I love how you have a different cultural greeting for her people.

@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings

Ooh love the fox profile! So cute!

Thanks!

Dante

Serin met Dante’s eye. “I apologize. I have a tendancy to… overreact at times. You see in Pelgar, where I am from, to reach out as if to touch someone when you are not family is seen as insult. Often used by enimies to goad us. It means to… force yoursel…[Read more]

@ava-blue

Lol, poor Ilwyn

@otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin

I finally got around to reading this, and I love it sooo much! I really like the magic system and the storylines. I wanna read it all right now, but it doesn’t fully exist yet. Do all the stories lead up to one big thing that happens (like the overthrow of the corrupt governments or something)?

Folith, you s…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

I love this version a lot more than the first version!! I could feel the sibling dynamic even more and connected with Iris and Asher more easily. I can’t wait to read more if you ever share!!

@orielle21

Lol yeah. We thought about keeping it a secret at first and then we just couldn’t. 🤣

lol! XD

@booksandbeakers

I might have missed this, but how does Amidala’s dad feel about Ev’s dad? Do they get along well? Does Ami’s father ever talk to Ev’s father about the way he treats his kids?

Ooooh. Really great question, actually! 😅 I’m thinkin’ that may come up at some point in the second book, cuz the second book is going to be more focused on…[Read more]

@orielle21

I didn’t know that @felicity was your sister!!

@devestate-lasting

Hey!! I’m Esther! A volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, amatuer writer!!

I’ve been writing since forever, but my writing had become more serious in the past two years. Plus, KP has helped my writing tremendously!! My main WIP is a dystopian YA trilogy, but I have lots of other ideas for other boo…[Read more]

@gracie-j

*gasp*

EVEN BETTER!!!! I absolutely love it!!! Thank you so much for doing this!

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Ooh love the fox profile! So cute!

Okay, Serin has had sufficient time-out time and is ready to say sorry XD

SERIN

Serin dropped the stick.

“You just keep your stick away from my little girl, ok?” Layson said, the kid now in his arms. Too caught up, Serin’s mind didn’t fully proscess the words he sai…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I must say, I love him tho. XD

Steve was the one person who kept him under control, lol. xD

XD yeah, now that Steve’s gone tho…

@princesachronicle @mineralizedwritings

Dante and Ellie 
“You never offer to touch me.” Serin hissed. Dante looked down at the stick and then back up at her face with his one eyebrow raised. He smirked and began to say something, but he caught Ellie’s eyes. They were wide and concerned. Dante paused  then chuckled lightly and backed off. Serin d…[Read more]

@princesachronicle

Yeah I’m writing an rp right now

@loopylin

You on? I wanna have Serin reconcile but I wanna see Dante’s reaction first

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @arien @felicity @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @loopylin @starofthenorth @princesachronicle22 @any-one-else-who-cares-XD

Okay!! Sorry this took so long. I revised the chapter, and added a little more. Freedom and Princesa, I don’t think y’all were on when I posted the before version. If you want to see the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76

Next chapter y’all!! I know, I know… another plot point. XD I really need to slow it down. I believe that the second book will be a bit slower and probably more focused on the tension among the group. When I edit the first book, I may have to tak…[Read more]