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@mineralizedwritings

Me too! Lol!

I’m a plantser, so I do have some things plotted, but most of it just plays out itself. For example, after they went to the prison, most of what happened afterwards wasn’t really in my outline. 🙂

@godlyfantasy @princesachronicle22

Sorry it took me so long to reply!

Anyway. Princesa, do you want to RP next. My charries are just kinda standing around waiting for Uvah to do something. XD

And, Godly, I don’t mind your using Aloth. 😉 You wrote him perfectly!

@keilah-h

YOU CATCH LIZARDS TOO!??!?!? (Haha, okay, sorry for yelling.)

That has been literally all I do when I’m outside ever since I was 5. I’m a professional lizard catcher XD. I actually caught a green anole this past summer and named her Lizzie. I tried to catch a male so I could release them at our woodpile, and have a little community of…[Read more]

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Congradulations on 21 chapters!

Thanks!

@mineralizedwritings

Yes! I do want critique! 🙂

You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!

Thx!! I love writing it!

I kinda get what you are trying to portray here, but that could be taken pretty badly by some. My personal opinion is that Ev would have a responsibility to both forgive and protect himself from f…

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@e-m-trepke

Now that I read over my post and just saw what you said, I guess that what I thought doesn’t really make any sense. 😅 But that’s okay. 😁

yes, the worldbuilding was awesome!

@katthewriter

These are all fantastic 😂

@loopylin

Oh yeah!! That would be fun. Matthew is probably gonna be so freaked out at any of the rooms haha.

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6

Do you want to put out group with Paxton, Tauren, Matthew, etc. in one of the weird rooms like the portrait hall or the ice room?

@keilah-h

yeah. I just used my Latin knowledge to smoosh together the words for gold and bird.

@theloonyone @keilah-h

Aurivis 

“Do you know how we can leave here?”

The man stumbled to his feet, breathing raggedly. He glared at Milo, but said nothing in response to his question.

“I don’t think the arrogant fool knows any more than we do.” Aurivis said, returning the man’s glare. He huffed and turned toward the others. “We will have to f…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Lol, I don’t think you’re alone

@gwyndalf-the-wise

lol, same. None of my stories are titled and many of my characters are just called “lifeguard dude” or “nerdy best friend”. My character Aurivis was just called “dragon mentor guy” for a really long time. I was finally forced to name him when I added him to the character castle. XD

@gwyndalf-the-wise  Lol the naming one XD

*clears throat*

Ok… I’m good now. 😁😁

Ok… so I absolutely love Ev and Ami’s friendship!! And Ami and Destry’s relationship!! <3

I have to tell someone this cuz I’m excited for when I finally get to write it, but Destry saying “Always, Ami. Always.” I gonna pop up again!

And Ev and Ami quoting the book together is also going to come up again!

Those scenes… oh I can’t wait to write t…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity@booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76

@gwyndalf-the-wise , I don’t know if you’re interested in reading more of my WIP. If you don’t want me to tag you so you can read at your own pace, just let me know. But if you do want to stay updated, let me know that as well. 🙂

Next two c…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

Really interesting opinion!

I think I can agree with you on that. Except that I think Harry Potter is young adult fiction/fantasy. In my mind, YA is like (11)12-18. (I may be wrong on the actually definition) At that point, I feel that young adults will be able to make up their own minds and not be so easily convinced of things.…[Read more]

@landric

Oooh!! I love both ideas! They both seem really interesting.

But I think I have to agree with Power and Freedom. I think the first one is the best!