@magicalstories0611
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yessss my babies need each other. I feel bad for splitting them up. 😣 I think their sadness is rubbing off on me. (Or maybe my sadness is rubbing off on them?)
Anyway, yes, that would be awesome. But maybe we should let Serin wake up first? And Dante can meet Steve again! : D
@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @m…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@orielle21 That was really cute! I love these two! Don’t worry, it’s not too late to do the Q and A until we start the next round. Though, you were just supposed to do four questions. (Sorry, I don’t think I was clear about that at all.) But, I can just convert 3/6 to 2/4 points. Would that be ok?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, sure! I would love to talk about your worldbuilding!
The biggest aspects of worldbuilding you’ve presented here I would say you’ve shown pretty well. It’s just part of the world, without making a point out of it or info-dumping, so well done as far as that goes! As for the worldbuilding itself, I do find it intriguing. You’ve…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 Hopefully this moves things along…
Ellie
After a bit, Silvia finished patching up Serin’s arm. She informed everyone that Serin seemed to be doing better, and finally, people began to relax.
Since they had nothing else to do while they waited, they decided to try to get some slee…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
That was so cool! I love the world building and the characters and everything! I was able to follow all of it pretty well. Are you going to post more?
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Loopy replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
*Dante and Ellie walk together down the hall towards the backstage lounge.*
Ellie: How did you know the answers to those questions? It’s kinda… creepy.
Dante: Creepy? I just guessed blue because of the blue hoodie you constantly wear, and you have flinched pretty much every time I’ve accidentally brushed against your arm or something. I’m no…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I likely won’t have time until Friday because I still don’t know what the next challenge will be. (I was thinking maybe doing a third wheel challenge? Not sure exactly what that would be, but it sounded fun to me)
If you don’t want to wait that long, though, you could figure out and start the next round yourself. I could still…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh okay! 🙂
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ❤️❤️❤️ @godlyfantasy12 Uh, I don’t know if i have time, I’m about to go to a church activity, but i’ll try to do it sometime tonight! Is it okay if I do a short time skip to where they’re planning? And also, do you want to bring your villain/antagonist (I can’t remember his name 😭) into this group…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for sharing!
I think I was able to follow along pretty well, there was a lot of context I didn’t have, but it was still digestible as a whole!
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Euodia replied to the topic Hello mates! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD
But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!
Do NOT worry about it, girl! Ackkk, tech…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic The long and tedious character naming process… in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Oooooh, okay! 😁 That makes sense now. Thanks so much!
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Esther replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Cool idea!!
I’ll have to hop on here later and post something. 😀
I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length.
I just did one too!! Mine was so much shorter. XD It’s impressive that you made it that long! Great job!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Aww, well, you like it, and that’s the most important thing!!!! 😃😁❤️😊
Definitely! 😊
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Euodia replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahhh, yessss. Rilla of Ingleside is honestly one of my favorite books. <3 Walter is amazing.
Same!!!!!!
Did you ever see the poem someone wrote for him (the one that they allude to in the book many times)?
Um… I can’t remember… which poem was it?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
If the pen is mightier than the sword, why do actions speak louder than words?
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizdwritings
Matthew
Jared’s brow furrowed and a forlorn expression covered his face.
He looked…lonely.
So lonely.
And I knew exactly how that felt.
Jared wrapped his arms around himself, trying to protect his body against the chill. “I-I don’t have any friends.”
I squeezed my eyes shut, my heart aching for this…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello mates! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
I am SO, SOO sorry it took me so long to respond!! My responce got deleted idk how many times and I ended up yelling at the computer “Wait…Error?! Of COURSE I wanted to do that! Why would I have pressed submit if I didn’t?!” XD
But, again, I’m so sorry! 😭😭 I hope you’ve been doing well!
HIIIII! *jumps up and down with…
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’m so glad he gets redeemed, but…but…
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
AHHH I know right!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
(i understand though. XD i have to do it a lot to charries, and everyone knows it 😂😂😂)
XDXD Haha, yeah. Sometimes it just has to happen, for the other characters to benefit from it (or not benefit, depends on the story 😂😭😭)
Aww, girl,…
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