@magicalstories0611
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
That was fun to read! I’m excited to meet Kun’en.
Also I noticed something just now. Despite their personalities conflicting so much, I think that Dante could actually really relate to Serin. They both are scared of getting too close to people and then getting hurt.
The difference is that Serin keeps people away by bei…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@princessachronicle22 Thanks! Feels weird rping as a character who is pretty much just me. Do you know what group I should join?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Thanks!!! 😄😊
Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
@kyronarcanin
Yes, I agree, awesome cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 😀
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 5 months ago
Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,
Desirable far beyond refined gold.
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.
Turning simple to wise,
Righteous, rejoicing the heart,
Purely, the light of my eyes,
Cleansing…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
I liked the long RP! 😁
Thx!
Ev
Ev grinned at Tony and Sam’s messing around. But he seriously considered Tony’s offer to help in math and science. Those were his weakest subjects. And if he wanted his father to be pleased, then maybe some help would be needed…
No. He wouldn’t mention anything about it… for now. He’d do just fin…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Here it is!
(It is really weird for me to get used to using his first name because all my charries call him by his last name. 😂)
Derek Len
Derek eyes the two people in front of him warily. One was a girl who was the height of a child, and the other was a man probably a foot taller than Derek.
The girl smiled sweetly up at Derek.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 5 months ago
Exactly! Forgiveness is so important.
Janus! 😬 Oh boy.
And Ridley. I feel so bad for him! 😭 (Especially after reading his RP.) I’m glad he gets redeemed. 🙂
But I also feel so bad for Lyn. Poor girl. 😭
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NoVeMbEr?!?!?!
WhAt?!
I must know more!!!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Poor Ridley!! 😭
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
(that’s everyone right?)
KUN’EN
He was very confused. One moment, Kun’en had been perfectly content eating late meal in the mess hall after teaching spear lessons to his favorite mongrels, the next he’d fallen backward into Depth knew where.
The room…[Read more]
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin Your all good! Also love your characters!
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Light posted an update 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @sarafini @whalekeeper @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @joy-calle @felicity @awsumfaith @esther-c @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else-I’m-forgetting-sorry
Hey everyone!! So…I’ve been thinking. And honestly, I’ve been s…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Okay, cool! Oh Poor Ridley 😭😭😭 That was so sad! He kinda reminds me of Corvina, like the whole hearing voices/seeing people, and not wanting to be controlled by their ‘Masters’.
Great RP!! 🙂
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Also, I LOVE Ridley!! His story is soooo sad and just ughh 😭😭😭
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Light replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
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I’ll miss you, and will be praying for you while you’re on this break. =)
I hope it goes wonderfully! ❤️❤️❤️
Okay! Yes, hope all goes well for you, hugs and loves!!! (:
That’s awesome that your taking some time off for yourself! We all look forward to seeing when you get back!
Ok! Have a good break light, we love you! I’ve been thinking about maybe doing the same lol
I’ll miss you so much, but I hope you have a good break. 😊 Can’t wait for when you come back!! ❤️❤️ I’ll be praying for you. 💖🙏🏻
Have a good break! I’ve noticed a lot of people have been doing that lately, and I honestly can’t blame them. Sometimes it’s good to step back for a bit.
Looking forward to your return, but hope you have a good break! Keep pressing on the upward way! ❤️❤️