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@whalekeeper

This might just be me being a grammar perfectionist, and you haven’t done it in a while, but I have noticed a couple times you have written sentences like this:

“He stopped at the door, listened.”

I’ve seen actual published authors do this too, so it’s probably not a big deal, but when I see it, it distracts me from the story bec…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Dude, I love your writing style so much though! I’m trying to find something in your role plays, but I might be better at critiquing a snippet (sorry you’re busy with school! If you can’t find one, that’s alright.). I’ll keep looking, though.

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks! 😊

I wonder why I do it though?

Do you have any common tropes like that?

@savannah_grace20009

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more important to know for politics and trade? Also, where do magic words come from? What makes them inherently different from other…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Uh like a fourth of them are. I have a lot of characters XD

@whalekeeper

Yeah, how I think of it is by their fruits you shall know them. But to know the fruits of something, you either have to judge by the spirit beforehand, or you have to put it into practice to know whether it be good or evil. The problem is that while good trees produce good fruit, and bad trees produce bad fruit, there are some things…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ok, well I can’t make him yell at them for something as little as that lol

Mr. Gregory 

Gregory rounded a corner and stopped suddenly in front of several (how many of them are there?) lizard-like students. One spun around and bared his teeth, but stopped when Mr Gregory wasn’t who he expected.

Who was he expecting, then?

“Sorry, sir…[Read more]

If you guys actually do end up doing a masquerade ball, I’d love to join later. That is, if there aren’t too many people already.

@whalekeeper @euodia-vision

Felicity 

“Decided to test the system?”

She shrugged. “School’s not really my thing.”

Lois looked at her disapprovingly. “You’ve never even been to school before.”

Felicity grinned at him and then quickly changed the subject.

“Anyway, like I was trying to ask earlier, what worlds are you guys from?”

She open…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh I did just realize that I have this one character dynamic that I always fall into. It’s where one character is the super chaotic one and constantly wants to go do things and they have a friend/sibling/coworker/whatever who is always really chill and tired, maybe a bit grumpy. The chaotic character is always dragging around the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

XD thanks

Oh, cool! What a nice coincidink. I never specified the color, so they can be white if u want.

@savannah_grace2009

This seems fun, a masquerade would be cool because we won’t show the character’s face, allowing us to show them in an either more hidden light, where their true character is behind the mask, vs a more open light, where when there face is hidden, their true colors and personality can come out. I might add a character here…[Read more]

@jonas

Fun idea! And nice strategy!

(Note on time bubbles: the bubbles cannot move. The person who created the bubble cannot leave without popping it. Objects entering or leaving the bubble are deflected wildly off course. For a person, having any part of your body in side the bubble is enough to be affected by it.)

(Extra note: the bubbles can…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…

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@freedomwriter76

@princesachronicle22 and he looks great too XD his story is so SADDDDD. poor boi 😭

Thanks! And yesss, I feel so bad to hurt him so😭

@lightoverdarkness6

XD XD

Hahaha! Poor Tyler the poor adorable boy 😂❤️

Ok, maybe it didn’t…

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al Roshan
(But because of his culture, everyone ca…[Read more]

Yay, it did it!

Ughhhh it’s deleted my post like three times. It better work this time 🤞

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al R…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings

Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.

Ruhan Amir al Roshan
(But because of his culture, everyone calls him Amir)[Read more]