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@freedomwriter

Good!!

YES!! AWWW GOOD!!

Great!! Yes, you MUST!! XD.

Yes!!!!

No, girl, don’t worry! I totally get it. And I’m sure everyone else gets it too. You are a great writer!

Yes, I know! I love doing it too XD.

Yes I know!!! He does love Leo! He just told me to tell you You’re welcome. Then he said to tell you that “Leo is awesome.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter

@freedomwriter

Happy tears right? ❤️❤️

Also, that is so sweet that Edy and Camille love Leo and Rueben. I bet they are so sweet to those little girls!!

YES THAT PART WAS SO PERFECT!!! It showed their relationship perfectly in that one scene. Are you going to include that scene in your actual book?

Yes, Julius!! His sweet, traumatized demeanor…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Ellie

The sound of someone approaching startled Ellie and she spun around, gun in hand.

“NO! Don’t hit her again!”

A man held up his hands in defense. “Wait! I’m not going to hurt you…I’m going to help you…please…let me help you help her…”

The man was now kneeling so that they were eye to eye. Ellie studied his fac…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 aww Camille and Edy are adorable! 🥰💕

@mineralizedwritings

Okay! I’ll try to finish it this weekend.

Yeah! I have this scene where Matthew is like “Why don’t we name him Frosty?” And Lyla had nightmares of Frosty when she was little or something and she snaps “We’re not naming him after a TALKING SNOWMAN!!” XD.

Oh okay. Sorry! Yeah, hopefully there will be one closer to your…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yes, that was good advice.

AWWW THANK YOU!! YOUR BOOKS ARE SOOO GOOD!!

YEAH!!

YOU ARE SO WELCOME!! Yes, how could anyone not love them??

I’M SO GLAD!!! I read that part with 12 year old Nathan crying and sad, and then Dawson comes over and makes him laugh and UGGHHGHHH!!! When I read that I was just like “OMG MY HEART!!!”

Oh…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah his hair comes down almost into his eyes. And covers his ears.

@freedomwriter

Oh my gosh!! I forgot about Julius and Kursk! I knew I was forgeting someone XD.

@mineralizedwritings

Cool! lol that’s funny! Yeah, I’ve tried to draw the deer, but it didn’t turn out great XD. I’ll try again and post it on here if you want! I need some drawing practice anyway. His name is Frost. No, I’m sorry, I don’t think I ever even said his name, only in Matthew’s RP.

Well good luck!!

You’re welcome!! Lol yeah, every…[Read more]

@keilah-h yeah, I can rp now! Sorry I was waiting because I was I was kinda out of ideas and wanted to see if freedom wanted to add anything first.

@freedomwriter76

Ellie 

The gun fired and Eddie collapsed.

Ellie yelled and ran to her. She had fallen forward and now lay on her stomach in the grass. Ellie rolled her over and propped her head…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

You’re fine! Yeah I get off around that same time.

*Hugs you tighter* *Hears you struggling to breathe* I’m sorry! I forgot you needed you to breathe XD. *Hugs you but not super tight* You’re WELCOME!!

Yes. I talked to a writer last night at a church activity, and she gave some good advice “Don’t wait until your book is…[Read more]

@loopylin

‘Your story sounds really cool! I don’t usually get interested in non-fasntasy, but I would totally read that. Matthew also seems cool, and you should add him to the castle if he’s your favorite. Or you could add both! 😁’

Awww thank you! Yeah I think I’m gonna add Carter later because Lyla is better developed than Carter or Mat…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin

Matthew

As I yelled, “Uh h-hello?” A red haired boy started and whipped around to face me. The older boy–no, man turned as well. I was close now. I could see that red haired boy held a bow. I walked up to them and stopped.

“Who are you?” The red haired boy asked.

“I’m Matthew. What are your names?”…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! That does help!

Also, I love your drawing of Kaine! That is a cool manga semi relistic style. How old is he again? Matthew is 13.

I got ur tag wrong @ava-blue

@mineralizedwritings thanks! I’m excited, I’ve never actually written them before.

@keilah-h  Yeah Dante is like a cyclops. His one eye is kinda his defining feature, so I am very disappointed in myself for forgetting about it. Here’s a drawing of him by @avablue