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November 10, 2022 at 6:20 pm #121235
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@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @keilah-h.
Leo
āFor your brother. Reuben. I apologize for the things I spoke, earlier. Wasā¦not the best way to handle the situation Iām afraid. Andā¦I apologize.ā Grimm apologized.
Leo bit his lip and turned to face him. “It’s okay…really…and…I’m sorry. I know everyone has gone through pain…and what I said…it was…wrong. Nyx mentioned how you lost your sister…and…”
He saw the pain and guilt cross Grimm’s face, and he mentally slapped himself. “I’m sorry Grimm…I’m such an idiot. I shouldn’t even bring that up…” Leo let out a deep breath. “I’m sorry…for everything.”
November 10, 2022 at 6:36 pm #121236Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @keilah-h. @loopylin. @mineralizedwritings. @theloonyone. @lightoverdarkness6. @anyone-else-I-forgot.
So…I want to add another few charries. XD I know I have a lot, but I’m fine! I can keep track of them! š
First off, Himmler Baumann.
He can show up in whatever group, I don’t care, but as he’s beginning to get his own book (hehe…XD) he needs some development desperately. xD
Here’s his pic, first:

So…he’s a GermanĀ LuftwaffeĀ (Air Force) officer, running a Prisoner of War camp. For timeline things, he’s recently discovered the Holocaust and is now working to save Jewish Prisoners of War that his older brothers (Felix and Hans…mwahahahahaha) want to put in the Concentration Camp. And, maybe even more important for this RP…his wife recently died.Ā
So…he’s dealing with some grief right now, that is for certain. *sniffs*
But anyways! Info that y’all actually NEED to know! I’m getting sidetracked. xD
34 years old. Prob around 5’11”. Has short, curly, dark brown hair, bright blue eyes, and pale skin. Wears a WWII GermanĀ LuftwaffeĀ officer uniform and cap, and long, tall, black boots. He’s kind, soft-spoken, reserved, quiet, highly intelligent, loving, and was a wonderful husband and is a wonderful father. The youngest of three boys, Himmler is…well…over 20 years younger than his middle brother, Hans, and his oldest brother Felix. And…you see…well…his brothers inherited their personalities and ideas of raising children and other related things from…well…their father. With an alcoholic and abusive father, Himmler has his own sets of scars, but as life has continued on, he hasn’t let those things stop him, he made a self-conscious decision to not be his father, and…his past helps him understand his Jewish nephews, Leo, Joshua, Jakob, Reuben, and Wolfgang.
November 10, 2022 at 6:43 pm #121237Anonymous
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Edy (Pronounced like E-dee) Baumann!

7 years old. Average height for a 7-year-old girl. Has long, bright blonde, straight hair that she wears in pigtail braids, dark blue eyes, pale skin, and wears a dress like the one in the picture, which is long sleeve, stockings, and black Mary Janes. She’s sweet, innocent, imaginative, loving, silly, and playful. All in all, she’s a little girl that will light up your world. She loves to play with her older sister Camille (pronounced Ca-Mill) and loves to make up games. She also loves spending time with her Daddy, but she doesn’t get to do that too much. And when they visit family, she loves some of her cousins! Not Annalise, Steffi, Adolphus, or Dietrich though…they’re not very nice! But she loves her other cousins, especially Leo, who always plays games with her.
November 10, 2022 at 6:52 pm #121239Anonymous
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And, finally,Ā Camille Baumann.Ā

9 years old. A little shorter than the average height for a 9-year-old girl. Has dark brown, curly hair that she wears in pigtail braids, dark green eyes, and pale skin. Wears a white, sweater-like dress, like the one in the picture, stockings, and white Mary Janes. She’s loving, honest, sweet, imaginative, compassionate, generous, creative, smart, and playful. She loves to play and make up stories with her sister Edy, loves to spend time with her Daddy, and, like Edy as well, loves to see the rest of their family. But their aunts and uncles and some of their cousins don’t seem very nice. Instead, like Edy, she loves to spend time with Leo, Joshua, Jakob, Reuben, and Wolfgang. Reuben is even teaching her how to draw pretty horses, her favorite animal! She misses her Mama, but she knows she’ll see her in Heaven again one day. Jesus has her Mama in his arms, just like Mama always said he would.
November 10, 2022 at 9:51 pm #121242@freedomwriter76 aww Camille and Edy are adorable! ??
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November 10, 2022 at 10:27 pm #121244@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Ellie
The sound of someone approaching startled Ellie and she spun around, gun in hand.
āNO! Donāt hit her again!ā
A man held up his hands in defense. āWait! Iām not going to hurt youā¦Iām going to help youā¦pleaseā¦let me help you help herā¦ā
The man was now kneeling so that they were eye to eye. Ellie studied his face, her tail lashing. He was one of Danteās new friends, but⦠she saw he was sincere. He wanted to help.
Her breathing slowed slightly as she lowered her gun and took a step back.
She glanced down at her sister and spoke in the steadiest voice she could manage. āSheās not hurt. Not too bad. I- I need to get her inside the ship, before itās taken. Everything we own is in there. Itās ⦠itās our home.ā
(Iāll do a Dante rp in the morning probably)
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November 10, 2022 at 11:45 pm #121248@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Grimm
He shook his head, swallowing down the sudden flash of memories. āNoā¦no. Itāsā¦alright. Iā¦ā He took in a deep breath. Went silent for a moment.
He looked at Paxton, a small smile on his lips.
āHe reminds me a lot of herā¦ā he mused. āWhen I first met himā¦it wasā¦hard.Ā To say the least. Butā¦Things areā¦easier now. Still not the same butā¦easier.ā
He smiled slightly, thinking of all his new friends.
Of the feisty fox sleeping in his arms.
Andā¦Jocelynā¦Whoād been helping him through so many thingsā¦
The brothers watched him with softened eyes, nodding. āIām sorryā¦for your loss. Iā¦I canāt imagine losingā¦ā Leoās voice strained with emotion as he glanced at his younger brothers.
Grimmās smile faltered slightly.
He looked at Paxton. āThatāsā¦thatās why I refuse to let anyone elseā¦ā His voice hitched slightly.
Noā¦it wasnāt his faultā¦
Miriās death wasnātā¦
He shook his head. āPoint isā¦ā he looked at Leo, a small smile on his face. āNo need to apologize.ā Leo returned the smile, adjusting Paxton in his arms.
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#ProtectSebNovember 11, 2022 at 9:40 am #121252@freedomwriter76 u wanna RP? Or @keilah-h if ur on
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#ProtectSebNovember 11, 2022 at 11:17 am #121254Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Sure, I’ll go! š @keilah-h. @elishavet-pidyon.
Leo
āNo need to apologize.ā Grimm said with a smile.
Leo smiled faintly and adjusted Paxton in his arms.
That look in Grimm’s eyes…Leo knew it.
Not all of it…but…some of it.
“Thank you. Really.”
“For what?” Grimm asked, raising an eyebrow.
“For being kind…forgiving…even after what I said to you.” Leo whispered. “There haven’t…been a lot of people in my life that have ever treated me like that…”
November 11, 2022 at 11:20 am #121255Anonymous
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@loopylin. Aww, thank you! I love them too! And they ARE very cute. xD <3 @keilah-h.
Reuben
āSheās not hurt. Not too bad. I- I need to get her inside the ship, before itās taken. Everything we own is in there. Itās ⦠itās our home.ā The girl’s voice trembled slightly, but she was trying to not show it.
Reuben knew what that felt like. “It…it’s okay…I’m going to help you…”
He glanced at the other girl, and, without much effort, had her in his arms. “Come on…I’ll get you there the best and fastest way I can…I promise…”
November 11, 2022 at 11:27 am #121256Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. GIRL!!!
So…I listen to a lot of music, as we all know, lol, and I’ve found a song that I put in Jayden’s playlist and probably Wolfgang’s, but I’m listening to it, and I was THINKING ABOUT PAXTON!!!
Anywho, the song is “You Are Known” by Matthew West. Just a great song. XD A lot of Matthew West fits my characters like Riker/Jayden/the bois, lol. xD
November 11, 2022 at 11:38 am #121257@freedomwriter76 Iāll have to check it out!!!
I listen to a ton of music too! I added some posts in the playlists forum and tagged u but idk if u saw them
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#ProtectSebNovember 11, 2022 at 11:38 am #121258@keilah-h u on?
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#ProtectSebNovember 11, 2022 at 11:40 am #121259Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12. Yes, I saw them!!!
I almost cried over Paxton, so…XD Yeah…I listened to them. Most of them, at least, not sure if I got to all of them, but I saw them!
November 11, 2022 at 12:44 pm #121265@godlyfantasy12 I am on now!
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Crosshair
Grimm and Leo weren’t that different….
For that matter, neither was he. Maybe he hadn’t lost a sibling, but their situations were somewhat similar…..
He didn’t have anything to add to the conversation, so he just watched.
āThank you. Really.ā Leo said.
āFor what?ā Grimm asked.
āFor being kindā¦forgivingā¦even after what I said to you.ā Leo replied. āThere havenātā¦been a lot of people in my life that have ever treated me like thatā¦ā
Nyx stirred, and Grimm stroked him, smiling slightly.
Then a sound echoed through the hallways.
“Did any of you hear that?” Crosshair looked from Nathan to Julius, on either side of him, and Feather in front of him.
(@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon I know this group is huge already, but I just wanted to give one of you a chance to introduce your new characters or ones that haven’t joined a group yet)
Kad
āSheās not hurt. Not too bad. I- I need to get her inside the ship, before itās taken. Everything we own is in there. Itās ⦠itās our home.ā Ellie whispered to the young human helping her.
Kad hissed, throwing off his enemy. This ship was the girls’ home? He hadn’t known before….
Now that he knew, he’d fight harder to help them keep it.
Gerald handled that. You donāt question Gerald. (if you know you know)
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