@magicalstories0611
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Unless all the rain that is coming down decides to melt everything.
That would be very sad. 😔
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
Currently, he’s trying to get me to play piano for church!! But I’ve got stage fright 😅😨. Maybe I will sometime.
You totally should! When I was little, I didn’t have stage fright; then I did kind of get stage fright; and finally I have sort of overcome it. 😅 The more you get on stage and do it, the easier it becomes. I actua…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, I have heard that one on the radio before!! I didn’t know his name though. Yes, that’s a great song. He’s got a beautiful voice 😍! Thank you for sharing!
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings
I’m not gonna be able to RP much for the next few days, (I’m helping my mom get ready for Christmas!!) so, y’all can make Matthew and Lyla just do whatever. I trust y’all. Or you could pretend that they disappeared, or maybe you could have your charries get separated from Matt and Lyla. Whatever…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Man, that was long. 😅
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok! I’m finally RPing! 😁
Everton
Next to him, Ami spoke up. “We’ll help you find them if you’d like.”
“That’d be great!” Jocelyn replied.
The small group continued down the hall. As they walked, Ev heard a man cry, “Hold still and you won’t be hurt!”
“Let go of me!” Replied a young woman’s voice.
It sounded as if th…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Hello! Nice to meet you and I appreciate the welcome. You would love my yard…there’s a creek running through it and I have to cross a bridge to get to my garden.😍 Now for the questions
Whoa!! 😍 That sounds Heavenly!
Ooo…favorite song changes a lot for me but right now it is Stand by Newsboys. Besides them, I like listening to For King…
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Light replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
XD
I’m fine, I’m wrapped up in my blanket and sitting by a fire, so now I’m warm! Thanks all the same! *shoves coat under chair to wait until next time shivers strike*
Okay, good!! 🙂 We’ve got a nice toasty fire going too! Me and my brother just went outside, and we have a kiddie pool that was filled with water, and it’s frozen solid…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Christmas Sci-fi short stories, feedback is necessary in the forum Genre-Writing 3 years, 9 months ago
Awesome!!
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
ahh now I can give advice!!!
Yay 😊😂!!
so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!
This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!
Oh, okay!
So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your book is.
Is it light, happy, a b…
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Congrats on 1000 words! Every bit counts! Right now it’s been taking me about two weeks to write that much… 🙁
Thank you!! Oh, man! Yeah, this is the first I’ve written any other than in the Character Castle, since like April 😬😶. So I guess I have some writing inspiration that’s been bundled up inside me for these last 8 months! I’ve got…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….
I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story eleme…
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Slender, and the height of dogs, or cats actually!
*gasp!* teeny dragons! : D
I know this is probably not at all what your dragons are like, but I have a dragon from another story that is the size of a small dog and behaves completely like a dog. His name is Arthur and he’s completely ridiculous and I love him.

Sorry for the r…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I love hearing the backstory with the elves and the dragons from Luna’s past! The world building is super cool
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I rlly like Carter btw!!
Thanks!
I feel like he’s gonna be like WHAAT?! When he figures out Luna is an elf and has a bit of “powers” tho XD, tho she can’t really use them too well, and that Paxton is a Fae
Lol, I don’t think anyone in this group has figured out that they’re from different worlds yet XD. Once they do, Carter is g…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Congrats on writing 1000 words! I liked it, and the hot sauce part is funny. I think it fits if you’re going for a comedy or kid’s story. Also, the name Iris is really pretty!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Ya’ll can do what you want with Easton
Carter
Magic? Who did it? Was it the dragon? If it was a human, where did they get their dragon stone? I thought I had the last bit. Carter wanted to pour out all the questions popping up inside him onto Luna, but he knew he would just seem a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @theloonyone Don’t worry, I got Milo 😉 @esther-c (Wait, Esther, are you in this group?)
Aurivis
A rope shot out from something one of the humans was holding, allowing them to climb up. Aurivis watched, mildly impressed by the contraption. The last man tried to climb the rope, but failed, sliding back down to the floor. Aurivis ch…[Read more]
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