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@landric

I’d say that it definitely depends upon the theme you’re trying to convey and the story itself. If the theme is more personal to the MC or POV character, then I’d go for first person. (But then, aren’t all themes personal to the MCs??? 😂 Idk. XD) And it depends on the story. I remember hearing about your WIP and I think you mention…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Love Viola btw, I somehow missed her earlier, I’m excited to see where this goes!

@acancello

Tips to stay focused? Well…

I’m not really sure. I think I just love my characters and my story so much, that I just have to write it. While I don’t write it every day, I do write it often because I love it so much. A way that I think helps me stay focused on this one project, is 1) Kingdom Pen and 2) my family. Y’all here on KP have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t think I have too much time right now, but I’ll try to do Liren’s really quick!

@freedomwriter76

AWWW TONY!!!! 😭😭😭  AND STEVE!!!! 😭😭😭

That does make so much sense because it fits right in with his arc. Great job!!!

(And poor Bucky!! 😭😭😭)

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

Of course!! You’re so welcome!! <3<3 And yeah…XD

Matthew

The man turned to me, his eyes glittering briefly with irritation. But he merely smirked. “Now, now, no need to be rash…”

Tony interupted him,“Who are you, Crow?”

The man turned to Tony, eyes narrowed. “Crow?”

“Y’know…the black, obnoxious bi…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

WHOOOO!!!!!! GO TONY!!! Aww, I love him!! Tony is going to have a very loyal boy following him around now ❤❤❤❤

ACHERON!!! *Death glare– or the Matthew glare XDXD* Wow, he wasn’t expecting that!!

And JARED!!! AHHH THE BABY!!!! 😭😭😭😭

And TAUREN AND LESLI AWWW I LOVE ALL OF Y’ALL’S CHARRIES SO MUCH!!!!!!…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Love it!!

Hmm, some title options for you,

Past Case, or Case of the Past- because they knew each other in the past and are now working on a case together?

Love Dealing or Dealing in love- because they are trying to stop dealers but its a romance?

Sorry I know they’re kind of a stretch, I’ll let you know if I think of…[Read more]

@loopylin

XD yes, sorry not sorry, I just love them <3

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

WoW Matthew had enough!! And he barely got any yet! XD My baby is UPSET!!

@Freedomwriter76 @Mineralizedwritings

Tony will have a FANTABULOUS nickname for Acheron😂

Oh My Gosh CANNOT WAIT for that XDXDXD

And yes, your poor baby!!! 😭😭😭

Ugh yes 😡😡

And sure! 😊

Matthew

Tony stared, eyes wide, mouth slightly ajar for a long moment.

Then his eyes glanced over to Lesli, Hurricane Hair–I mean Tauren–and me. “…What jus…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

This is so good!

Aww thank you so much!! 🥰

Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!

Ahh I know!! I’ve got that partially figured out…heh 😅😏

And yes, I’ll make sure they’re not hurt anymore!!

(in this scene, anyway &…[Read more]

Ok, I’ll give people more time to enter characters and then I’ll start the first round either tonight or tomorrow

@mineralizedwritings

AHH I love it!!!! 💖💖😭😭

It’s a similair idea yeah, I changed it a little though. A lot of the book is them trying to complete his bucket list before he dies 😭 it’s going to be really sweet though 😭

😭😭😭😭

So sweet…but so sad!!

@light-warrior-pen

Sounds fun! Good job for finishing it by the way! So it’s basically a spy adventure romance? I’ll think on that, is it also a comedy?

@lightoverdarkness6

This is so good! Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!

@e-m-trepke

Good luck on your thesis! That’s a really good question. I think that it’s a lot of things. It can be escapism from the real world, it can be thoughtful discussion, it could be an expression of self, all of the above. I think that readers will resonate with different things, as based around their own personal experience. I also think…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @orielle21 @folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

What a wonderful idea!!

*shoves Ami and Ev into their booth*

Ami: Wha—?

Mike: *groans* Before you ask anything… this is a couples game show!

Ami: *blushes*

Ev: I can dig it. *puts arm around Ami’s should…[Read more]

@folith-feolin @otherworldlyhistorian

(So that was severely depressing. I was too committed to finishing my post last night, that I ended up typing it up until 2 in the morning, but I didn’t back it up, and it got deleted when I tried posting it😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. *Note to self: go to sleep*)

(Ok, from the beginning again)

(I’ve listened to the first…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Hm…

I’ll think about what to title it and when I get some ideas I’ll let ya know! 😀 😉