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@power

*Convulses into spasms then collapsed to the ground* 😫😫😫

NOOOOOOO!!!! HAVE MERCY ON YOUR POOR READERS!!!! 😭😭😭

IT’S SO DRAMATIC!!! 😤😤😤

Oh, I am so sorry 😂. May I ask, is it that specific romance suggestion, or the very idea of the word itself?

@jonas

Yeah I agree! I could maybe do one this morning, but I’ll be pretty today and tomorrow

We’ll see!

@freed_and_redeemed

Awww I love these scenes!!! 💖

But that second one 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

As for your question about Riker and Leon…

I honestly don’t know if I could choose one over the other. They’re both incredibly diverse characters and I love both of them so much!! 💕 I love how their journey through pain, guilt, grief and anger brings…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

Eeeek girlie I forgot how much I love your charries 🤩🥰

Um ideas for Mira’s powers…honestly y’all already said what I had in mind 🙂 But if I think of something else I’ll let you know!!

I’m sorry that wasn’t very helpful 😅

Please pray for my family. We are under a severe thunderstorm alert, and my grandparents are under a tornado warning, and are currently in their basement.

@esther-c

I totally forgot to do descriptions!! 😅

Welp,

Serin

I have an old pic of Serin, but it won’t show.

Looks- she’s Pelgarkine, which means light blue skin, taller than the average human. And shiny aquamarine hair. She wears fitted and sleek metal armor that glints different colors of silver, green, and blue. She’s carrying a simple…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ahh, that was so good but so saddd!! 😭 Poor Abelard 🥺

Ok, but when they first saw each other and started calling each other names, I thought immediately of Steve and Bucky. XD  Like when they said something along the lines of:

“Don’t do anything stupid without me.”

“How can I? You’re taking all the stupid with you.”

I t…[Read more]

@magicalstories0611

I love this so much!! These characters are ✨a m a z i n g✨

Power ideas for Mira…. Ummm… Idk. XD My brother and I were going to write a book together at some point and one of the villains has the ability to manipulate sound. Either he can manipulate how someone hears something or just sound in general. We’d thought it’d…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Ok, thanks!

Fynn

Fynn squinted as Navin pulled out two glowing rocks from his pocket.

“Uh… d- do you want a light? But don’t shake it. It’ll explode.”

Fynn carefully grabbed it, holding it as still as possible. Though he seriously considered shaking it once or twice. “Now that the whole school’s probably been plunged into…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Glad I could help! :))

@esther-c

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

XD Sammmeeee, I’m a total sucker

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loo…

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And you could totally play with his backstory like why he chooses or has to fight as a gladiator when he’s just this super nice guy

@princesachronicle22

Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD

You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.

I like Loopy’s idea too.…[Read more]

@anyone

Okay I had one idea that is kinda random but it’s there.

He could be this Gladiator who fights for entertainment, who looks all fierce in the ring, but then in reality is this perfect gentleman and all sweet and always apologizes to his opponents after he fights them. And he and the MC meet before one of his matches and then she’s like”…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Aww, I love that!! Siblings dynamics are the best. XD

@theducktator

That sounds very inconvenient to live under. No wonder your characters want to get out. Does just the Orb shrink, or does everything inside it shrink too?

Oh yes, very inconvenient 😑 lol

Just the Orb itself

I’m terrified that by the time I get to experience 4 feet of snow I’ll be too old to enjoy it. XD

Lol! For real XD

@freed_and_redeemed

Umm… my immediate answer would be Leon. I find him more relatable in a general sense and for some reason I just love him more. XD I wish I could give you more of a complete answer, lol. I guess I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said.

And that scene….

Girl!!! They’re smuggling Bibles together?!! I love that!! 😆

@freed_and_redeemed @stephie

Thanks!! 🥰

It was because i saw a pic of a girl riding piggyback with a guy and I was like, “I need to put this in my book!” XD

@loopylin

Thanks! No that’s great!

He could possibly be from outside the city, but it would be difficult

But I definitely like the idea of him not knowing or caring about her making Vital! And it could be something she worry’s about or has dealt with in the past. A ‘you only care about the money’ situation.

@princesachronicle22

Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.

I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari  can ma…[Read more]