Audra

@kathleenramm

Hmm… Least favorite main character type? I guess I really have problems with the perfect ones. Especially the ones who are in their teens or young adult years and unbelievably wise, even up to the point of counseling their older siblings and friends on problems which they have no experience in (e.g. romantic relationships).

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, I totally feel this!!  Everything people already said was great, but the thing I’d consider the most is to try writing something new.  That doesn’t mean you’re giving up on your book, you just need a break from your particular WIP.  And, hey, you might even get some ideas for your 2nd draft from another project… that’s ha…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Ooo, awesome question!  Well, my answer would be that I hate the passive heroes.  The ones that let everyone tell them what to do, or the ones that just “go with the flow.”  There’s a time and a place for that, but definitely not in the MC, imo! 😄

Oh, and melodramatic/overly-emotional heroes are the worst!!  Like when they just sit…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

From :24–:12= 554 words

Last lines:

Am I strong? I can learn to be; only the strong are hopeful.
Am I ready? It’s now or never, and I can’t go back.
Am I hope? Michael believes I am. He sees it in me.  I think I’m learning to believe him.

We’ll have to do it again sometime, Daisy. 😉

@daisy-torres

Of course, thanks for joining!!! 😃  Awesome word count and last line!!!!!  Super intriguing 🙂

@daisy-torres

Cool, starting at :24

@daisy-torres

i loooove the leaderboard idea!!!!  awesome job!

@issawriter7

girk, you did soooo good!!!! 😃💛

@daisy-and/or-issa, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @nanisnook, @abigail-m, @writerlexi1216, @mkfairygirl, @devastate-lasting

Want to write with me rn?  or soon?

@sparksaraabbott11

Hey!  Sorry I’m late… but welcome to KP!!!  I’m Ella, and as I was reading over past posts, I see we have a lot in common!  KotLC is like my favorite series ever!!!  And all the music you mentioned I love!  And Song of the Sea…  I have literally watched that five times–it is sooo good!!

A little more about me:  I play bb…[Read more]

@gracie-j

OOO, I am loving this topic!! 😉  (You are such a good writer btw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)  And you’re totally not the only romance guru out there–I adore sweet/well-written romances sooo much!!!!!!!!!

My favorite kiss scenes are the ones where you’ve been waiting for it for so long, and then when it happens, everything seems r…[Read more]

@kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

@jodi-maile @nova21 @joelle-stone

Okay, sounds great! 😀

(@joelle-stone I really hope you check out Fireflies in December!!! I desperately want to talk about it with someone. 😛 )

@sparksaraabbott11

How cool! I love characters who struggle with the things Cora does. 😀

@sparksaraabbott11

I’m several days late (*facepalm*), but hi Spark! Welcome to the forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂

Here are a couple questions, if you like questions. 😉

1. Who are your top three authors?

2. If you had to change your name, what would you change it to?

3. Ice cream or frozen yogurt? (Random question… But oh well!)

@joelle-stone @jodi-maile @nova21

(I figured, since we’re working on this together, I’d tag you all. If you’d rather I just tag one of you, don’t hesitate to let me know😉)

Perhaps we should start with the type of blurb you want to do? I know some authors summarize the beginning of the story and the main conflict, others will just use a quote…[Read more]

@jodi-maile

Thank you so much! 😀

@joelle-stone

Yes, it is! That is an excerpt from one of my favorite scenes in Shadows (or Falling, as it might soon be called). 😀

@writerlexi1216

Thank you so much, Lexi! (I have to agree; dragons are awesome! XD)

Oh boy… I don’t even know where to begin! The main theme of it is falling. It sounds odd, but by the end, that’s pretty much what has happened. The main character (who doesn’t appear in the excerpt… *facepalm*), Duxus Aledrick, falls due to his pride, a…[Read more]

@lewilliams

Aww, thank you so much, Elizabeth! I’m Lydia. It’s nice to meet you! 🙂

I’d love to talk about it! (It’s one of those things I could go on forever about🙂) What would you like to know?

Woah, your excerpt is really good! What kind of setting is your world in? It’s super interesting. 😀