@lrose5
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
“I’ll find you, Grace.” I whispered through the tears.Â
Was it a pledge or a plea? A desperation to be enough or a doubt that I ever could? Would I find her just to loose her again?Â
No. I couldn’t. I won’t.
Two stone heads burned in the back of my mind, two names scrawled on top.Â
No. I couldn’t lose her too. I won’t be the only one le…[Read more]
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
“Till death do us part.”Â
Sickness. Dearth too soon. Closing with another promise.Â
“I’ll keep her safe, I promise i’ll keep our baby safe.”Â
Intruders. Cornered by soldiers. Gunshot killing my sunshine.Â
“No, please not again.”Â
Pain. Crushed by guilt. Anger coursing through my veins.Â
“You’ll pay. You’ll pay for all that you’ve done.…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 and GodlyFantasy12 are now friends 2 years ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Also, (I’ll reply to all yall in just a sec) here’s the graphic/aesthetic of each of the MC’s and a lil kinda about them snippet.
Who was I? Was I anyone before? All I had were foggy memories of white walls and pain, and some sinister feeling that I was missing something. Did I have a family before being in this camp? Was I somebody? Or am I…[Read more]
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Koshka posted an update 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 Hey y’all! We’re in between quiz tournaments and I’m way behind in my verses, plus I’m struggling to be ready to graduate come June. I need to cut back on screen time right now so I can focus on work *grimace* so I need to pull the Twins from the RP. I’ve been trying not to do this, but it’s become necessary. I’ll…[Read more]
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@koshka I can’t say I’m not heartbroken…but I do understand and I hope everything goes well and we see you again maybe after June!!! Love ya Koshka!!! (The twins… 😭)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Wait, November, WHAT? NOO! What does she want you to do?
What did you just decide to do?!
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Koshka replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)
Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
AHHHHH!!!! LEO AND TALIA!! That scene was sooo…..I love y’all’s charies.
Zlatan
Voices. Zlatan tensed, one hand sliding to his sword hilt. He was on the floor with his shoulder leaning against something hard. How…?
“…waking up.”
He blinked, eyes adjusting to the flickering torchlight. Glimmering stone…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
@elanor Aww thank you girl! No I totally agree. I think night time is when we quiet our thoughts more and allow words to flow better. Everything just clicks best that way 😂
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KattheWriter started the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he would…[Read more]
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KattheWriter posted an update 2 years ago
I just finished Chapter 27 of my book! 😀
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Btw, Zlatan was beaten, not whipped, so he probably has a few healing broken ribs. Thus the difficulty breathing under strain.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Ugh. November, it’s not your fault! *Sniffle* Your poor darling, always accusing yourself of everything that happens. *Wipes away tears*
And Zlatan will NOT be happy if he finds out November blamed himself for this.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76Â @godlyfantasy12
RIKER! NOVEMBER! Neither of you are mistakes or worthless! *Sniffles into handkerchief*
(Zlatan has been pushing himself way farther than the healer would ever approve, and he just went through a stressful situation where his adrenalin and blood pressure would have spiked, which is not good for someone with a…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76 Lol wait till you learn about Linear Algebra (though you probably won’t, that’s my cross to bear).
Aww, thank you for the prayers! Yeah, nah, my friends are like that to me as well, except even more harsh, though I know it’s cuz they care about me.
Yeah, can’t wait to talk to you more too!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@felicity That sounds really good! I’d love to try it someday!
@lewilliams Eyyyyyyy there’s that familiar platypus profile picture! Good to see you too! Life is. Kind of a roller-coaster, I have a really busy semester ahead of me and I’m not sure how I’m going to balance writing with it, but we’ll see. How are you?
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@felicity I’m reindeer, and my name there is same as here.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@power Eyy love to see that you’re still here! One of the core tenets of the forum.
@booksandbeakers Oo that’d be exciting!
@folith-feolin Eyyy Lovecraft is definitely something else! He has beautiful prose!
@felicity Nice to meet you! What are some of the desserts you make?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here and I write… A bunch of randomness really. Realistic medieval fantasy is what genre I place my WIPs, but nonfiction and poetry are never too far off.
Although poetry is usually much closer.
I’m thrilled to meet another poetry lover! Nature is a…[Read more]
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