@lrose5
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Koshka replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)
Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
AHHHHH!!!! LEO AND TALIA!! That scene was sooo…..I love y’all’s charies.
Zlatan
Voices. Zlatan tensed, one hand sliding to his sword hilt. He was on the floor with his shoulder leaning against something hard. How…?
“…waking up.”
He blinked, eyes adjusting to the flickering torchlight. Glimmering stone…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 10 months ago
@elanor Aww thank you girl! No I totally agree. I think night time is when we quiet our thoughts more and allow words to flow better. Everything just clicks best that way 😂
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KattheWriter started the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I gripped the bars of the cell so hard my knuckles turned white.
I thought he had changed.
I thought he cared.
He did it.
The thing I never thought he would do.
I felt like I was in a haze.
The noise of chains met my ears.
He said he understood.
He helped me.
How could he?
I staggered and gripped the bars harder.
He said he would…[Read more]
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KattheWriter posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
I just finished Chapter 27 of my book! 😀
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Btw, Zlatan was beaten, not whipped, so he probably has a few healing broken ribs. Thus the difficulty breathing under strain.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ugh. November, it’s not your fault! *Sniffle* Your poor darling, always accusing yourself of everything that happens. *Wipes away tears*
And Zlatan will NOT be happy if he finds out November blamed himself for this.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76Â @godlyfantasy12
RIKER! NOVEMBER! Neither of you are mistakes or worthless! *Sniffles into handkerchief*
(Zlatan has been pushing himself way farther than the healer would ever approve, and he just went through a stressful situation where his adrenalin and blood pressure would have spiked, which is not good for someone with a…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Lol wait till you learn about Linear Algebra (though you probably won’t, that’s my cross to bear).
Aww, thank you for the prayers! Yeah, nah, my friends are like that to me as well, except even more harsh, though I know it’s cuz they care about me.
Yeah, can’t wait to talk to you more too!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@felicity That sounds really good! I’d love to try it someday!
@lewilliams Eyyyyyyy there’s that familiar platypus profile picture! Good to see you too! Life is. Kind of a roller-coaster, I have a really busy semester ahead of me and I’m not sure how I’m going to balance writing with it, but we’ll see. How are you?
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@felicity I’m reindeer, and my name there is same as here.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@power Eyy love to see that you’re still here! One of the core tenets of the forum.
@booksandbeakers Oo that’d be exciting!
@folith-feolin Eyyy Lovecraft is definitely something else! He has beautiful prose!
@felicity Nice to meet you! What are some of the desserts you make?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 10 months ago
Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here and I write… A bunch of randomness really. Realistic medieval fantasy is what genre I place my WIPs, but nonfiction and poetry are never too far off.
Although poetry is usually much closer.
I’m thrilled to meet another poetry lover! Nature is a…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@sarafini Yes! Stories definitely get easier the more you do. Hey, novelettes and novellas are impressive! I’ve done very few of those.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@loopylin I believe horror has supernatural elements whereas thriller is more of a crime thing, like the difference between a ghost and a killer. The premise of your story sounds a lot like Bendy and the Ink Machine, but I would totally read it!
Aye, I believe you can also finish a book one day!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@loopylin Hey there! Another Lin! Yeah, Alice in Wonderland is definitely on the surreal side and is One of The Books Of All Time. Oo, you do horror too? I have some half-written short stories that try to be a bit on the horror side, but I feel like a lot of mine edge on thriller instead.
I do have several finished books, but nothing published…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76Â @godlyfantasy12
I’m currently sitting in on a quiz, so I have a minute. I don’t know if I’ll get another chance today, and I’ll be off and on for the next couple weeks, so maybe RP as you like and I’ll try to pop in when I can? Unless one of my charies need to respond, then like, triple tag me or something.*Shrug* I don’t…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic What is going on anymore in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Lol yeah it’s something similar to Alice in Wonderland or something like that, where nothing makes sense.
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