Lorelei Angelino

@writerlexi1216 I know right? At this point all the names I have currently for my future kids I’ve already used for characters…. ;-;

“Hey mom, did you name me after this guy from-”

“No. Don’t ask me about it.”

@nova21 Whoa! That’s gorgeous!

On a side note I have a guy character named Aven so I think of him every time I see your things... 〒▽〒

@gracie-j @writerlexi1216 On a semi-related note most of the names I came up with for future kids have all ended up being names for characters.

@daisy-torres AHH that was so good and sad and beautiful! I love your descriptions!

@libby Cool. Thanks! 🙂

@joy-caroline That was great!

@hallie-jean @writerlexi1216 (Psst….helpful tip…just copy/paste from underneath everyone’s username on the left…I do it all the time…)

@nova21 Of course! Anytime!

@hallie-jean @nova21 These look fantastic!

@nova21 I just finished reading the chapter and it was A-MA-ZING!!!!!! I loved it from the beginning, but I got really hooked when we got to the part with the “uncle”!!!!!! I love the MC too! She makes me think of a spy a little bit. 😉 I thought the pacing was really good and I would definitely keep reading!!! 🙂 I absolutely enjoyed it!!!!!

@writerlexi1216

I ADORE this chapter soooooo much!!!!! Like WHERE do I even begin????

1. YESS!!!! Your characters are soooooo awesome!!!!! Deek’s probably my fav. Just saying. XD

2. YES!!! I’d HAVE to keep on reading ’cause there’s just soooo many questions and I NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!

3. The pacing is PERFECT!!! I LOOOOVED this second chapter…[Read more]

@nova21

Aww, girl, you’re ABSOLUTELY 100% WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a pleasure to be able to read that first chapter!!!!! I enjoyed it soooooo much!!!! Oooh, YEA!!! That’d be really cool!!!!!! You’re soooo welcome, Ella!!!!!!!!! <333

@writerlexi1216 Of course! I remember when I was writing my first novel too, haha…long time ago. Oh, the memories…good luck!

@nova21 Eyy sorry this took so long but I finally finished your chapter! I really like your setup, and I really want to know the overall story! Keep writing, girl!

@writerlexi1216 Just finished it! Left a few notes here and there. I think you did good! Caira is quite interesting, and I would like to find out more! I think that the pacing is good for a novel.

Can’t wait to see more!

@joy-caroline

Girl, this was INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I LOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!! You’re very talented at this!!!!!!! <333

@gracie-j

Well, I know for me, if there’s a lot of characters in a story a cast list really helps me keep track of who is who. Normally, cast lists don’t spoil anything for me ’cause I’m someone who only reads it when a character shows up a second time and I don’t remember who he/she was. So you could put it at the end of your book, and it could…[Read more]

@gracie-j For manga I read usually the authors put one character profile after each chapter or so. For myself I usually put a list after the story/section (see link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/abluvion_14214021505660705/cast-of-characters_48658453379471721)

I usually try not to spoil the story, if they are important before but have some…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms Cool!!!! Fanfic is a lot of fun!!!!! I’ve only written two fanfic short stories and they were based on The False Prince by Jennifer A. Nielsen. Maybe I’ll share them here soon. 🙂

Name: Linyang

Tag: @devastate-lasting

Experience: Inexperienced, but I’ve done things such as judging short story contests and other things

Style: Somewhere in between Gummy Worm and Dark Chocolate

Brainstorming-ness: I’m way better at line-editing, ngl, so 2 or 3?

Time: A couple of hours, make two or three weeks.

Word count: I prefer…[Read more]