Loopy

@loopylin yeah, definitely!

@rae wow nice character! Hunter will probably be like “oh, another Omega” and start being overtly protective lol.

oh, and Hunter will probably find Silvanis to be suspicious but cool.

Jaylen, meanwhile, will probably follow him EVERYWHERE, as he’ll probably remind her of both her brother and Mundy (especially with the knives and sniper rifle…[Read more]

@loopylin

She’s so cuuuute XD Hey, and she has my hair style too!

@loopylin

The people I’m house sitting for have goats and one of them kept nibbling at my jeans today because apparently I wasn’t feeding her fast enough.

We have a good number of goats, two bucks, one wether, four kids, and seven does. Our goats that are full grown don’t really know me much, cuz I have made little to no effort to bond with the…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Snorts* Just imagining someone with a pet goat around the house –

@rae You got that right @loopylin

Sebzter

The best part about the whole thing was how, in utter confusion in the darkness, those in the halls joined the bullies in a tidal wave of people. They had no idea what the rush was about, but followed quickly.

The leaders, however, were perfectly aware of what was happening, insomuch as revenge was…[Read more]

@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol

who wants to read more Leon and Riker???

perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂

anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo

Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…

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@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee

SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)

but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩

I’m currently on…[Read more]

@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol

Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!

The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @esther-c @whalekeeper @rae @loopylin @anyone-I’m-forgetting

Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! <3 They were very kind and helpful and it means a lot that y’all took some time to respond💕

and don’t worry, Riker/Leon will both be fine!!

Eventually

😏

@stephie

Yeah, plotting is probably one of my weaker points of writing. 😂 The extent to which I plot varies from story to story and I’m not sure if that’s a good thing… XD

Another suggestion would be to try and write the worst first draft you could possibly write. That’s how my dad got more than 100% on a university level essay.

I may just ha…[Read more]

@loopylin

I really like the outfits!

@loopylin you’re welcome!

(I like sentients with tails for some reason.)

@loopylin

Waiiiit… isn’t the Penderwicks third person??? Or have I officially gone insane?

@esther-c

I don’t really think I’ll be able to help, cuz I’m completely out of my element when it comes to contemporary.

I don’t know about the first vs. third person problem, but if you have multiple POV characters, I’d recommend that you stick to…[Read more]

@loopylin

When Dante returns, he will most likely find Jr in the room trying to figure out how to read the note. Jr has a vast knowledge of languages, but this language he can only speak and understand, reading is basically impossible for him (he probably recognizes words here and there, but otherwise nothing)

I feel like Sebzter Gangster is…[Read more]

I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else

ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]

@loopylin awesome! She’s got a nice tail.