Kingdom Pen | LivGiordano | Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/livgiordano/activity/ Activity feed for LivGiordano. Fri, 24 Apr 2026 13:37:33 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 58ecaa9c8f707d1d57cb39a356933c84 LivGiordano and Corissa Maiden of Praise are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/88135/ Fri, 19 Jun 2020 13:47:43 -0400 0 39ad24933df8c1bbcd77cd3deeabc3c7 LivGiordano replied to the topic Clean Christian Music in the forum Music http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/clean-christian-music/page/2/#post-71632 Thu, 26 Apr 2018 01:41:20 -0400 @jenwriter I like more of the traditional, not-so-modern sounding music. XD. Well…sometimes I like more popular Christian, but it really depends.

Sarah Sparks!! Oh my gosh. Her Narnia music is so beautiful.

Keith and Kristyn Getty have some pretty good stuff too.

Shane and Shane have some good music as well.

 

]]> 140d654c4efb107e29501cc907783692 LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70890 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 22:21:26 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.

]]> ab1857e48c0c20b9996f712bdb7db66e LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70862 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 15:55:33 -0400 @filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

]]> 0130a39d2879ca479b4d701a07d08b90 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70857 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 13:05:58 -0400 @ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.

]]> 87f7480bfb218eefbfbdaa967d33bd1a LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70856 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 13:05:22 -0400 @ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> e34919b717d61861e6dd9595f092d41e LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70824 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:59:12 -0400 @ariel-ashira Oh really? That was you? Congrats on getting published! And I really enjoyed your poem! XD. I’ve tried memorizing Broken. And I’ve only gotten like the first two lines.

Yup. I beat you too it. ๐Ÿ˜‰

So…I would rather not let the whole world see my work, so could I share it with you through Google Docs via email?

Lol. Yes, @filewrite…[Read more]

]]> f99aeb97cc9faa7a63af3c3adccb3e32 LivGiordano and Ariel Ashira are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/77969/ Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:45:06 -0400 0 754078b2aaea309f7590435c37c2c172 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70817 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:31:31 -0400 @ariel-ashira Aww really? Iย  feel so honored! And I needed to hear that today. It originally started out as just something I wrote for myself out of my heart, but afterย  sharing it with a few friends, they said I should submit it to KP. And so I did. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I can definitely share some more of my poetry with you if you’re interested. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> 90b279461d0e6d33d417f327409784ef LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70813 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:24:07 -0400 Yes, I am! @ariel-ashira

]]> adf0916a6fc547234b11d1e5c4553896 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70810 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:17:14 -0400 Lol yes. @filewriterbase13x is a very good friend. And if you don’t mind me mentioning it, I was the one who recommended that she should join. ๐Ÿ˜‰ This place is pretty cool. *high fives back* And yes, I can definitely say that you’re one of my best friends, girl.

]]> 53daef795b068d25b787370ac9d8e4c9 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70797 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:28:52 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I would totally go for this if I hadn’t already read it. ๐Ÿ˜‰ *nods* To everyone else, go for it!! It’s soo good.

]]> d49e4d42a7360228f9bfb6f59b110598 LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70655 Thu, 12 Apr 2018 15:13:22 -0400 Can you fit me in, @filewriterbase13x? And I think you know me well enough to figure out how to portray me accurately. ๐Ÿ˜‰ I LOVED those. They were so good.

]]> 3d6ec50e1da888f098458098d74a9b8c LivGiordano replied to the topic Including the gospel without being cheesy in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/including-the-gospel-without-being-cheesy/#post-70305 Sat, 07 Apr 2018 13:25:36 -0400 @daeus This is amazing. Thank you for sharing. @filewriterbase13x I think you might like this. Pretty relevant, right?

]]> ae1458248ceb34675b21e1e7f7b753d5 LivGiordano replied to the topic Would this be wierd? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/would-this-be-wierd/#post-68172 Thu, 22 Mar 2018 19:02:30 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I pretty much agree with the rest of them. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah, I definitely think that would be pretty cool if you wove in some of his POV. It would let us know that he’s not just sitting around doing nothing the whole time, ya know?

Oh, and also, this is kinda of random, but think about why he is evil. Yes, people are inherently evil,…[Read more]

]]> 32ea58a426e43469d866539b8072909d LivGiordano and Julia R. are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/74660/ Tue, 20 Mar 2018 13:18:43 -0400 0 7480bc7598c1661199842cad258570fc LivGiordano replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-keeper-adventure/page/21/#post-67470 Mon, 19 Mar 2018 23:51:20 -0400 Ooh, this is great, @Dekreel! Okay…how would I describe myself? *takes a deep breath and plunges in*

My favorite foods are chocolate, pickles, and salad. I am *very* uncoordinated, but I love playing soccer. I do not freak out. I pretty much just stay calm and inwardly freak out. Yeah. I mostly keep my emotions to myself. I have blonde,…[Read more]

]]> 8117cafb1e0e670475f2a9fc67789469 LivGiordano replied to the topic New here in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-here/#post-67330 Mon, 19 Mar 2018 00:19:59 -0400 @filewriterbase13x ELIZABETH!! *tackle hugs* It’s so awesome, and slightly strange to see you here. But YAY! I know you’ll absolutely love it. This place has been great for me so far, so…😉😘

]]> c97d9328a15616d4048de60bb845baa9 LivGiordano and Bella B. are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/73987/ Fri, 16 Mar 2018 01:27:14 -0400 0 3ac39f5bb757e274744f8d975b7043fc LivGiordano and Lady Bella are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/73406/ Mon, 12 Mar 2018 12:26:34 -0400 0 6a76345dd3349ace7d9b990ed59236b9 LivGiordano replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/one-of-my-mcs-is-a-mk/#post-64487 Fri, 23 Feb 2018 01:57:22 -0500 @catwing Hmm. I could say a ton about this.

Like everyone else has said, yes, MKs are not all the same, stereotypes of either really good kids, or teens who don’t want to be there.

They can be just as normal as regular kids.

One thing I do notice, is that in general, it can be pretty hard to fit in. Living and knowing another culture very well,…[Read more]

]]> 165f64af517be7e38f7e8762f5a7cccb LivGiordano replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/free-verse-poem-advice-critique/#post-64359 Wed, 21 Feb 2018 23:59:48 -0500 Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.

To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.

Maybe, you could…[Read more]

]]> 679a98d95c931b84b54a94082bd26e7b LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day... in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/in-honor-of-valentines-day/page/3/#post-63840 Fri, 16 Feb 2018 11:08:42 -0500 @rochellaine 😂 I would’ve thought that you already read it. But I wrote that vaguely just in case. Good thing I did. *coughs* Speed read like crazy so you can find out. Okay…and I didn’t spoil anything. Yet. Just gave you vague hints of something. 😏🤐And then let me know your reaction when you finish.

]]> e6d23587ac2a16986b31ba21e87aefe8 LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day... in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/in-honor-of-valentines-day/page/3/#post-63795 Fri, 16 Feb 2018 01:29:52 -0500 @rochellaine I’m just leaving it at that. You’ll have to keep reading to find out. Let’s just say that he should take the nickname “Noble”. For this case, at least…

]]> c7bfd636e2c614b551eb391a468b3bff LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day... in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/in-honor-of-valentines-day/page/3/#post-63772 Thu, 15 Feb 2018 23:37:06 -0500 @rochellaine @salome01w4g I love the Boy Colonel, as well as the other two. XD.ย  I think Chester might be my favorite though. And Edmund. Wow. I think he deserves a high ranking. *cries* Especially that ending.

]]> 53b2da4bda818424b9f02d730d31b57f LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day... in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/in-honor-of-valentines-day/#post-63424 Wed, 14 Feb 2018 00:22:32 -0500 Ohh. @inkling-for-christ Those two are definitely on the list. Haha. There’s so many though.

]]> 6c64b043dfc7b507a9170f9f5e7129fd LivGiordano replied to the topic In Honor of Valentine's Day... in the forum Book Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/in-honor-of-valentines-day/#post-63419 Tue, 13 Feb 2018 23:29:02 -0500 @rochellaine Well, this is fun! *coughs* Some of the guys are in books not yet published from Ydubbers. Like someone named Ian. *coughs* Let’s just say he’s pretty awesome.

And from actually published books…

I would have to say Nat from the Witch of Blackbird Pond. Also Drew from the Wars of the Realm trilogy. Ooh, and I have one that’s more…[Read more]

]]> 9e654b4efc80b852dc5fb7655536d466 LivGiordano replied to the topic WE WON! in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/we-won/#post-62524 Tue, 06 Feb 2018 17:39:03 -0500 We are close to Philly, so everyone around here is Eagles fans! And I’m so happy that they won!!! Especially at the end, when they gave glory to God. That was just way too awesome! *cheers*

]]> 64b3b6f5cd502a04d183a34bcc659cda LivGiordano replied to the topic Questions about writing a short story in the forum Plotting http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/questions-about-writing-a-short-story/#post-62521 Tue, 06 Feb 2018 16:44:47 -0500 @skredder That makes sense. It’s a snippet of the full-length arc. A teaser to the full-length story. Okay. *nods* That gives me a new perspective on this. Very helpful! Thank you.

@mariposa I really like the idea of doing the same kind of arc on a smaller level. It gives a hint of the overall story, but it’s not as huge or a really big…[Read more]

]]> 52b15639fc16562ed69fec856808a347 LivGiordano started the topic Questions about writing a short story in the forum Plotting http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/questions-about-writing-a-short-story/ Sun, 04 Feb 2018 19:34:03 -0500 I’ve been desiring more and more to figure out how to write short stories, but it seems so…complicated.

So on someone’s blog, they are doing a short story contest. Here’s the link, if anyone’s interested:ย https://jesusisworthitall.weebly.com/for-writers/beauty-for-ashes-story-contest

And as soon as I saw the theme, I was like…wow. Because…[Read more]

]]> 31739848ae1a5b39c66bc4740c3e48e1 LivGiordano replied to the topic Anyone here doing YWW? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-here-doing-yww/page/2/#post-62349 Sun, 04 Feb 2018 01:46:22 -0500 @epicaddie2 Yup. I started it. ๐Ÿ˜‰

]]> 012b198a1bb3d1bb1966ac6d74ab51d9 LivGiordano replied to the topic Anyone here doing YWW? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-here-doing-yww/page/2/#post-62347 Sun, 04 Feb 2018 01:21:16 -0500 *laughs* You’re following me. I just saw the notification.

]]> 42566c409776d9a0ce6ab5ccc4ad3f38 LivGiordano replied to the topic Anyone here doing YWW? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-here-doing-yww/page/2/#post-62345 Sun, 04 Feb 2018 01:20:11 -0500 @epicaddie2 My name is Olivia Giordano. ๐Ÿ™‚ And I think I’ve followed you. You have the same picture as on here, right?

]]> 912f1f7ffc34c2bd9fda404a6f33ee68 LivGiordano replied to the topic Before the Sunrise - Missionary Kid Realistic Fiction in the forum Short Story Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/before-the-sunrise-missionary-kid-realistic-fiction/page/2/#post-62155 Sat, 03 Feb 2018 00:36:04 -0500 @gh24682468999 I’m an MK (or recent MK) I can look at it if you want

]]> 3eab61dd8881a368794004b438c7db42 LivGiordano replied to the topic You know you're a bookworm when.... in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/you-know-youre-a-bookworm-when/#post-62153 Sat, 03 Feb 2018 00:32:29 -0500 You know you’re a bookworm when you read a book in a day, and then wish you hadn’t read it so fast, because now there’s nothing else to read.

]]> e6d768df3f6547e17a012f8e4cae3b41 LivGiordano replied to the topic Anyone here doing YWW? in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-here-doing-yww/page/2/#post-62152 Sat, 03 Feb 2018 00:29:33 -0500 Me! I’ve been on there for about six months now. It’s really awesome.

]]> 5ed9d6343d657616cc212a88ee0fa853 LivGiordano and Emily D are now friends https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/68860/ Thu, 01 Feb 2018 08:34:29 -0500 0 716d3c0e393e34e71d1ccc31a44223e9 LivGiordano replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/weird-things-people-tell-me-cause-im-a-writer/page/3/#post-61854 Wed, 31 Jan 2018 01:26:12 -0500 @jenwriter17 yup. That’s exactly what happens. It’sย  pretty funny. Or we talk in whispers.

@seekjustice Yeah, I don’t like reading any of my stuff aloud, but Iย  could totally imagine that happening. Yes, siblings are pretty good with that. ๐Ÿ™‚

]]> c77f50974e8feede552c53e52017b1fe LivGiordano replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/weird-things-people-tell-me-cause-im-a-writer/page/3/#post-61797 Tue, 30 Jan 2018 13:26:46 -0500 I have an awkward conversation whenever someone asks me “so, what’s your book about?” I’m like….uhh. I used to start out by saying “it’s fantasy”. Until my mom said that for her generation it meant a totally different (not so great) thing. O_O Whoops. So now I can say it’s fiction. *laughs* I guess I’m getting a *little* better at saying what…[Read more]

]]> 5e4af4eb52c95a66fc3428d6d38a0c42 LivGiordano replied to the topic Salutations! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/salutations-2/#post-61076 Tue, 23 Jan 2018 17:22:21 -0500 Welcome! @kaya-young Ooh, some of your favorite authors are mine as well. I love Elizabeth George Speare and CS Lewis.

I really love your name. It’s so pretty.

What’s your favorite color?

Have you read the Ilyon Chronicles, or Lord of the Rings? They’re both really good. Ohh, and how about Chuck Black? If you’re a fantasy fan, I think you would…[Read more]

]]> 2d29bde49319a09fa1047cb568745fc0 LivGiordano replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/howdy-2/#post-61075 Tue, 23 Jan 2018 17:16:50 -0500 Welcome! @aviantrail Do you have many siblings? I have four younger ones. What’s your favorite color?

]]> 1521df687c2467ef95bdf30c6bfba4a3 LivGiordano replied to the topic How do we define "worth" when there is no actual God figure in the story? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-we-define-worth-when-there-is-no-actual-god-figure-in-the-story/page/2/#post-61011 Tue, 23 Jan 2018 01:31:18 -0500 @jenwriter17 Thank you! I meant to tell you that I found it before. ๐Ÿ˜‰ It was actually published here on KP a while ago, I think. And it’s really helpful. I just reread it. There’s so much to learn.

]]> 189fdb748cb009c63735f01b5900753a LivGiordano replied to the topic How do we define "worth" when there is no actual God figure in the story? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-we-define-worth-when-there-is-no-actual-god-figure-in-the-story/page/2/#post-61010 Tue, 23 Jan 2018 01:27:43 -0500 @that_writer_girl_99 Kind of, I guess. *face desks* Actually, tbh, no. Not really. I’m still figuring it out. But more, what I’m wrestling through now, is actually showing the theme is a way that’s not preachy. I’ve decided not to have God actually in the story, but to try to portray it as a reflection of his glory. This is tough. XD But I’m…[Read more]

]]> aa4b776fcb6fb1d3a84a86e7fd607380 LivGiordano replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-diary-of-nameless/page/2/#post-60649 Fri, 19 Jan 2018 02:01:03 -0500 I’m up for it if you still need readers, @Daeus. I know you’ve already got a lot of people, so if not, that’s totally fine.

]]> 25a6fccfa968efe0f6ce75723e795a1f LivGiordano replied to the topic Let me introduce myself... in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/let-me-introduce-myself/page/2/#post-60647 Fri, 19 Jan 2018 01:52:51 -0500 Hello! And welcome, @pickupyourpenandwrite. I’m a newbie here too. ๐Ÿ˜‰ This place is awesome. What are some of your favorite books and/or authors?

@rochellaine I didn’t know there was a 1940 Pride and Prejudice! That sounds totally awesome. I’ve watched the two other versions. ๐Ÿ™‚

I love your name, btw. One of my good friends is named Elizabeth.…[Read more]

]]> 267cf4e38b293e4194a0a17fef828f1d LivGiordano replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/inserting-pictures/page/2/#post-60643 Fri, 19 Jan 2018 01:47:02 -0500 *laughs* I didn’t, so good for you!

]]> 8e99c6ae4a11822ede1d19996d6af3aa LivGiordano replied to the topic Inserting Pictures in the forum Questions and Support http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/inserting-pictures/page/2/#post-60564 Thu, 18 Jan 2018 12:58:32 -0500 O_O @clairec I know I’m just popping in here, but did you haveย  to dissect a fish? We did that last yearย  for school. Not the greatest experience.

]]> 88648fd01f96cd90b9d58f922996463a LivGiordano replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-4/page/5/#post-60563 Thu, 18 Jan 2018 12:52:21 -0500 Oh that’s really cool, @sleepwalkingmk If you’re ever back here on furlough, it would be awesome to meet. ๐Ÿ˜‰

]]> 6b4f0f7632789c9cad7cfbd7b3615e63 LivGiordano replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-4/page/5/#post-60511 Wed, 17 Jan 2018 23:17:18 -0500 Here’s more to it too. The part I had forgotten. XD

Oh dear. Must I explain this again? XD my brother was joking about how YWW is kinda like BWW (buffalo wild wings) and you know how they call that BDubs. So he came up with YDubs, I happened to mention that on my intro post, and it stuck XD

]]> ae1e9e2bc07aad18709077bad6fc3a23 LivGiordano replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-4/page/5/#post-60506 Wed, 17 Jan 2018 22:02:30 -0500 @sleepwalkingmk I guess so. ๐Ÿ˜‰ I think it helped that Marit was telling you that she would try to have the chapter up before you went to bed.ย  I’m from New Jersey, and that’s where we currently are living. Where are you from?

@emma-flournoy Now you understand why it’sย  so disappointing. *sobs* Yeah, you’ll love Nellie’s wedding. And the i…[Read more]

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