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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Is there room for one more?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Anyone just love Eragon by Christopher Paolini? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years ago
I hope you like it! It can get a little graphic in violence at times, but it’s nothing too bad and it’s really well written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @grcr @acancello @jonas @hybridlore
Guys don’t you find it weird that there’s 907 members on KP (it says at the bottom of the screen when you click on “community”) and there’s only a few that are on here a lot? WHERE ARE ALL THE OTHERS? haha! I’m kind of hyper, I had a double shot espresso right before my volleyball game…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Sorry, i’m not good at explaining things, especially my stories! All I know is that Earth is the same Earth, and I think that Adam and Eve don’t exist either in “stories” or anything. I think that I’m trying to make this story for the secular world to speak truth (i think sometimes if the world knows that somethings from the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
You are so lucky to have a mom who you can go to for advice on writing! I love my mom and she’s basically my best friend, but when it comes to writing, I’m on my own. She doesn’t like the kind of writing I write because she gets really sad and depressed when the scenes are sad. Same with my dad.
I had to teach myself how to write up until…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
@lydia-s if you want to read more I’ll tag you when i post this chapter!
Thanks! It’s one of my favorites!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
And of course don’t feel bad if you don’t have time to read it, I get it, and glad you’re working on your WIP so much! And great work, 54 pages is a lot! I remember how happy I was when I hit 50 pages 🙂 Idk how many pages mine is since I’m using a platform called Reedsy and it doesn’t have pages (kind of weird, i know), but I have…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
no worries! I’m busy too, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Yay!!! Thank you!!! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨'s profile was updated 3 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂
I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 3 years ago
What’s your guys’ favorite Christian music artists? My favorites are Colton Dixon, Jeremy Camp, Tasha Layton, Dan Bremnes, and For King and Country!
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Oooh that’s tough, I like Toby Mac, occasionally Britt Nicole and of course For King and Country!
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Also Rend Collective! 🙂
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Sammmme, I also like Britt Nicole! And Rend Collective’s good too!
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Oh yeah, and TobyMac.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!
I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Behold, my WIP | The Purple Eyed in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.
Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.
I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!
Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Okay guys, here’s the most romantic thing I’ve written so far:
“Sef!”
Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should answer, she knew that hiding would only make him worse, but she was paralyzed with the cold hands of fea…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
I hope so!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁
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My hands were shaking so bad!
Yeah. I’m guessing there are people who joined and basically just “left” but didn’t delete their accounts.
@jonas
yeah it’s kind of sad 🙁 I love KP
A lot of people joined a long time ago and are adults now, so don’t really have time for KP I guess. Other ppl join and then NEVER come on. But 907 does seem pretty high.
Also there’s an age limit, so once you turn 25 or something like that, you can’t use it anymore. I’m not sure if your account is deleted after that, but yeah, basically what @highscribeofaetherium said.
lol, yeah… I think about that often…. 🙃 Cloaked Mystery is probably right.
By the way, if at all possible, do not drink double shot espresso before a game. (totally not speaking from experience)
lol
I saw this post called “character castle” and I really think it’d be fun, but there’s already too many characters, so should I make another one, and if I did would you guys join?
If you don’t know what a character castle is, there’s one in the section “general writing discussions” I believe.
Oh, sorry this is late! If you make another, I would definitely join!
okay! I’ll tag you when I do!
Yeah, like Highscribe said, they might be adults and not have time, or just super busy people 🙂
I think there is a Character castle 2.0, but its not as popular as #1, I think @freedomwriter76 and @whalekeeper and @godlyfantasy12 know most about it 😀
@acancello
I was also thinking…what if I made a “character castle” without a castle, in a different place, like “character treehouse” (okay that sounds lame, but you know what I mean) or “character birthday party” or something like that?