Liberty

Why is it we can never keep our charries out of trouble?

@jonas

Conviction and Ellis glowed green, but Nahim was not to be daunted.

“Lower your weapons! I won’t kill, but you won’t enjoy holes in your arms!”

There, I revealed what “weapons” the Lillennings had tried to use against the dragons. Only the Queen’s blood has magic, so Fennin also used some magic, but no one else could.

@everyone

Fennin

Prince Fennin stood on a balcony near the high ceiling of the banquet hall, watching every bit of the unfolding ordeal. These guests interested him greatly, especially the weapons they carried.

Lillennings had only tried to fight with wooden spears and shields, along with some bows and arrows, but they couldn’t forge metal.…[Read more]

@jonas @hanako @freedomwriter76 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium

Nahim

At the entrance of a stranger, gun at ready Zahlin drew his sword. So did everyone else. That was it. He drew his gun and shot three blasts into the air and aimed it for the heart of the stranger. The sound of the shots echoed through the hall.

“That’s enough! Everyone stay…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I think that’s the best intro yet! Just bursts in there with a gun in his hand! XD Love It!

@freedomwriter76

Thanks, I just felt in the mood.

@hanako @jonas @grcr @highscribe (to lazy to find your actual tag) @savannah_grace2009

Nahim

Before Ottoline could answer there was a shout of someone murdering each other. Nahim spun, alarmed, hand unhooking his sword ready for anything. Ellis, Zahlin and two new people Nahim hadn’t met were all in an argument, Zahlin looking ready to kill a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Tis true

@janellebelovedpig

I love that poem!!

@savannah_grace2009

I mean, she could’ve had a crush before her family moved… but I didn’t think that far back lol. It doesn’t really matter for the sake of the story though. I’ll try to update this again soon.

@jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-i-missed

Kari

Kari observed the conversations in the room as she slowly ate the food on the table before her. She was too hungry to care about whether or not she was being poisoned; besides, why would the queen want to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Nahim

“She’s alright.” Nahim spun around. All it was was one of guys he had seen at the party. Nahim looked at Ottoline. She was still trembling a little, but she seemed relieved by the presence of the other man. “She’s just a little on edge.” ‘Yeh, she’s afraid of me.’ 

“Ottoline, that’s a pretty name, it fits you. Well, w…[Read more]

Woops! It might be tomorrow before I can look at your website. Eh! Tech, so many problems!

@devastate-lasting

Honestly (IF you want my opinion) I like your originally title. Though it’s your choice.

Ooh! A button I can push!

@savannah_grace2009

Oh man! This will be interesting.

Also, how domyiu correctly pronounce ‘Ottoline?’

@savannah_grace2009

“I-I-I’m Ottoline.” The girl clasped her hands. She was trembling.

“Are you alright?” ‘She better not be scared of me.’ “Are you chilled?”

@devastate-lasting

Hmmm…Now I think I might read this book if I had time.

Two comments:

1)

Outside there was a guy on a skateboard riding around the half-deserted lot in front of the store. He had blonde hair that was getting…

So I think that thses two sentences could potentially flow into each other better.

2) Ignore this one if you don’t…[Read more]

@hanako

Also, have I mentioned this already but I really like your pfp.

@jonas

If Ellis doesn’t like him, that could lead to some problems potentially.

@hanako

Thanks 🙂 I was hoping people would now like them!