Liberty

@raxforge

Sypher

“Master Rax?” Syph propped one elbow atop the youth’s head and twisted around to squint behind him. But this felt almost too secure a position. Too controlled. He hummed to himself, resting his crossed arms on his makeshift table.

Still, there were advantages to being this high. He didn’t have to crane his neck to study the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“Well…” Leo dragged out the word into a verbal smile. “First things first, you’ll need to get cleaned up for the day. I have some extra clothes you can have, and most of those bandages need changed too. Then breakfast. If you need help with anything, please let me know. I’ve been knocked about a few times before. Leaves…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah, Nahim always wore at least a speeder mask or a helmet for about five years, so that’s probably what she compared him with.

@liberty

OH. MY. WORD.

I die every time I hear that part!!!! OH MY GOODNESS!!! Poor Jarold!

@keilah-h @raxforge

Worst. Idea. Ever! My brothers won’t stop jabbering about all the new stupid slang! XD

Yeahhh I considered telling my brothers and then decided against it lol. There is so much new “brain rot”, as my brother would say, that sometimes I feel out of touch with my own generation. I can’t tell you how many times I pretend I know w…[Read more]

@liberty

oh good. lololol.

The way that he says dunderheaded in the Scottish accent in the drama! Priceless!!!

@savannah_grace2009

I’m a little late to responding, but as I was reading the things you shared, I just had a couple thoughts. Not sure if they’ll be helpful or not, but I figured I’d share anyway and let you decide lol.

One thing I noticed that could potentially be a lie (and maybe this fits more for future scenes after this all takes place) is…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

One of my friends compared I think Nahim to someone from Star Wars or something, but idr.

Other than that, i don’t think anyone’s even known enough about my characters to compare them to others. Recently, I only really talk about characters on here or with Andrew. Mainly cuz my friends don’t really follow when I start ranting XD.

@hybridlore

He did, in his way. And he’ll address it again soon enough.

@liberty

WHAT!?!? You don’t like that one? (or are you choking with laughter?)

@koshka

Rory

Rory blinked slowly and looked around him. Where was he? what had happened? For a moment a shock of terror tore through him. Had they caught him:? was this…. His eyes found Leo’s and slowly the events of last night slid back into place. His shoulders relaxed and he looked down. “Sorry.”He glanced at Leo from the corner of his…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Amen! God writes the best stories.

@whalekeeper

Oh my. XD Lucille Barnes…..that’s perfect and I haven’t even seen the Mandalorian.

Now I have to remember who’s been compared to whom…I haven’t seen most of them so I usually don’t remember…

@whalekeeper

Oh, that’s not good. I’ll be praying you get stuff figured out, and find a good solution.

@stephie

Yay!! God is good!

The Knoweth Jesus Version all the way!!

Although I do sometimes use the Elect Standard Version for clarification. However,  sounds so much more “spiritual” to forget that, and just say I look it up in the WLC/BYZ. No matter that I can’t read it without Strong’s help. XD

@raxforge

Oh gracious. I’m trying to visualize how this would work/look like. XD

BTW, Sypher looks and acts pretty much like a 14 year old (he’s marginally older as his people have a slightly longer life spans than most people) just a 4 1/2 foot 14 year old. I don’t remember if I said his age…XD

Sypher

The world spun was a cacophony of color…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*randomly pops in*

Maybe having Leon point that out would help readers realize it more?

@raxforge

Sypher

He looked up at this Rax person less than two feet taller than him and frowned. “I’m a little old to be riding shoulders, but…” a smile darted across his face. “If you wouldn’t mind my following you, I could use a wave breaker just about now. You know, follow in your wake. I’d be much obliged.”

He stuffed his hands into his…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I’m glad it helped! I knew a lot of it was randomness, but when I can look at my difficulty in a new light, everything can start to click. Randomness that really doesn’t fit is typically what I use like. XD

I was trying to imply with that part, how Neveah’s heart broke for Sef. Putting myself in Neveah’s shoes, nothing wou…

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@ellette-giselle

Leo

“Whoa, kid, don’t knock yourself out.” Leo got to his feet, setting Quincy down in the chair behind him and reaching to steady the comforter entangled boy. He caught Rory’s flailing hand. Dazed green eyes turned to look at him. Confused.

“Rory, sit back down.” He offered gave a gentle smile. “I don’t think you’re fully awake yet.