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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Awwww!!!
But in six months he’s moving to Florida for college…..😭😭
At least I have a little brother <333 I love him to DEATH…I literally love him so muchhhh
That is so funny that your MC is named Hallie because (I know I’ve told you this before but Imma say it again hahaha) my little sister’s name is Hallie!!! so it’s just…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I know!! Poor kid. You don’t know whether to laugh or cry.🥺
Rory
Rory leaned against the wall and ran his arm over his forehead. “So, where are we going? Now that I’m your assistant, what should I do?”
(sorry, but Rory and I are equally lost on how to move forward. We don’t know much about the school’s underworld.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
It looks good to me! (But I’m not a huge outliner as previously stated.)
so, does this mean you’re gonna start posting chapters?! 😃
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Jaybird replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, I don’t usually respond on here either, but I still try to bring the posts I see to God.
And, oof. Getting a job can be rough. I’ll be praying.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I bet if i made Dante bored enough, he’d sneak into the school and pretend to be a student for the day. That would be fun.
lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Alpha
Alpha shrugged. “She put a kid in the hospital, and thought she could take care of me too. So I stabbed her. And yes, I do often stab people.” Alpha paused, thinking about what he had just said, for the first time considering how his audience would take that information without context. “Though, it’s not just because I’m bored.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
speaking of jews, what are your honest thoughts on them? Like how to you see them?
I believe they are God’s people, and that the promises God made still apply. I don’t believe that the Church is the new Israel.
Other than them being God’s people, I don’t stand behind them. They support the lgbtq+ community last I heard, and I…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
“those d*** Christians” Did she say dumb? Or something else Idk about… but besides that, I think that would take patience, not snapping back at them.
No- I didn’t type the whole word because most people consider it a cuss word- she said “damn”. I don’t consider it as bad as the f-word but I definitely still don’t use it.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
and I have already written some scenes for it btw, but most of them are huge spoilers atm🤭
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 forgot to tag you😅🫠
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Well, I made the forum, the forum stopped working for me, and I also disappeared off the face of the earth for over two weeks😂💀 well I’ll try to answer questions/responses now😅
@highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @keilah-h @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @elishavet-pidyon @theshadow @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @loopylin @koshka @trailbl…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ooh, I’ve also got to add in the part about the gov trying to pass a new law that allows them to persecute Christians, but I haven’t figured out when yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Great! 😁
Okay, I see what you mean. Are you thinking like, within their friend groups? Most of the story so far takes place either at school, the church meetings, or their house. Later, though, there will probably be a lot of scenes at their respective job assignments, so you’ll get to see more of the culture then. Do you have any i…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
The pocket thing. XD
Leo
The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.
Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.
Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*Gasp of joy*
He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD
Kinda want to change my profile pic now…
*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ok! That will be something I’ll add to my notes. 👍
Yay! Thank you!!
@savannah_grac2009
Girllll, you’re so sweet!!! 🤪🥰 Seriously, your reaction really means a lot. 😊
That was actually kinda my goal—I wanted this story to be someone’s comfort book, because I loosely based a few aspects of it off of my comfort books. (I’m no…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
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