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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
I didn’t find this one on my own, it was sent to me, but it’s great!

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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 10 months ago
Striking, dodging, lundging, falling, blocking, missing, caring, running through.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
What’s your vote? Chester and Libbie, or Albert and Libbie? I’m not gonna give any spoilers, but I’m curious to hear your thoughts.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I’m back y’all! I started reading through some of it while I ate breakfast this morning but didn’t have a chance to get fully caught up until now. If any of you asked me a question that I don’t answer here, just remind me. I think I devoured about ten pages total between breakfast and right now lol.
I think it’s a good thing that Kari’s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@rae @highscribeofatherium @acanello
Hedieh
Hedieh’s eyes lit up as she watched the two men begin to fight. Wow, this escalated quickly. Fighting didn’t bother her much, but with these two, it could be much worse than a good-hearted duel.
She glanced down at an old sword lying in the corner. Just in case, she reminded herself, trying to igno…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Splitting headache was right. Nahum’s head was complaining about the sudden movements. But he kept on, dodging, blinking, striking, missing. He studied the style Zahlin fought. It is good, skilled, practised, expieranced. He didn’t hold his blade like he had learned more recently, no, Zahlin was taught when he was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
🤣🤣
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
Nahim smiled. “At least I have an honest opponent. And honestly, I think that we can match each other.” He swung in from the side, but was blocked. Zahlin stabbed and Nahim moved to the side, letting the sword miss him by a couple inches. “I usually have defeated my opponents by now.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
To explain Nahim’s statement, this is a portion from my book…
Nahim carried the traits of a true son of Nayhelm. He was a full-blood Realn, a descendant of those who charged behind Emperor Aradin against the consuming dragons of the Realn Isles. Of the same blood as those who sailed the great sea about Wond. A child, by a thread, of those who…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Nahim
“So are we rattling off lists of things we’ve survived now?” Zahlin said. He glanced at the other two. “Get out of the way and don’t run for Fennin.” He glared at Nahim. “He has no right to stop us.”
Nahim stared back, shedding his armor to make the fight more fair.* He drew his sword, the green blade glowed and even pulsed as Nahim readi…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Ooooh, I’m going to have to read all these charrie backstories you posted and post some of my own later. Looks fun. 😏 And I have a character who has some dark backstory, just have fleshed out all the details yet.
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofatherium @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Ok, so I think I’ve caught up with everything now. XD
(I’m most active during the afternoons, so I think I miss it when y’all are most active. (: )
Oh boy, Hedieh’s at the forge. 🫢 That could be dangerous.
And for swords/weapons and such, in Amir’s actually story, he…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
So, Mithaln is a very strong metal, and it is rumored to have some varieties that are actually sentient and rational. Gold Mithaln most likely is that way, but I haven’t decided for sure.
To give you an idea of it’s strength, Nahim, when he was dueling Vorgan, had Vorgan defeated. But the drider caused the Nanian aboveground castle to collapse.…[Read more]
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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