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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@beth-torres also has Silas, Carrie’s twin, who showed up more recently.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
The whole RP started off as a party and now… lol it’s been a wild ride!
Initially, the characters met up in a house that locked them in and forced them to have a masquerade ball if they wanted to go home, but then the queen of Lillen transported them into her world to help save her people. Jonas already alluded to the…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m sorry I don’t have that scene written yet or I would post it lol. I need to find a good way to write it so that it’s sweet and meaningful.
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I need a friend like Fynn XD
I don’t know… you might regret it later 🤣
Fynn
“You know what… I don’t know.” He flashed her a grin. After a beat of silence, Fynn said, “So, I guess you’re going to the dance with Lukas. He’s not as… uncontrollable as I am, but,” he changed his voice to sound like an old, learned professor, “he’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Fynn
“I’m rethinking my life choices,” Liv shook her head.
“I would too if I were in your place. Except I haven’t really made any solid life choices.” He tilted his head, trying to contain his smile.
Liv’s look made Fynn chuckle. “I’m just kidding. I’ve made at least one life decision… I’m taking Callie to the dance.” He…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh yeah XD So I hadn’t gotten to that part when I wrote that post, but I think I’m about to get to it. I’m nearing the end of the book, (maybe like the last fifth of it or something like that?), and I think that part is coming. I’ll give you detail once I finish it. 😁
Oh wait, you’re reading Haikyuu, right?
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys! Could use some prayer.
I woke up this morning with my jaw feeling really tight and almost stuck to where I couldn’t move it. I was able to get it to move somewhat comfortable again, but I still don’t have my full range of motion and it’s hard to eat normally. We think it did this because I have a habit of clenching or grinding my teeth…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I’m new here! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
@elli-wingfeather
Welcome to KP, Ellie!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl! I’ve written fantasy and dystopian, but I have ideas in historical fiction and contemporary.
Now to learn more about you!
1. Assuming that you like WFS because of your username… Who’s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Ello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
Honestly I like them all! Lol (sept for parts where it’s ether gore or inappropriate😬 ) I’ve only played Halo 1 and 2 and the arcade version! (I’ve also played Halo wars, but anyhow!)
Ah, gotcha. don’t have a favorite. XD Awesome though!!
Really I have a lot! Lol! Maybe… I don’t know.I like them all! :I
Hehe, I understand, lol!
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Esther replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
This is a cool idea! So I have an app called YouVersion, and they have multiple reading plans on there that will take you through the Bible in a year. You could look at some of them and figure out the chapters you would need to read each day or week.
I don’t know if I’ll join or not, but just an idea to make it a little easier. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Help? in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 8 months ago
Ooh, that’s hard.
Um… I don’t know if this is too dark or not, or even what you’re going for, but I remember in Harry Potter that Bellatrix was torturing Hermione (in the seventh book) and Ron and Harry couldn’t see what was happening, but they heard her screams. Obviously, it sounds worse in an actual movie than reading it in a book. But…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 8 months ago
yes I’ve read the hiding place and I absolutely love it! Have you ever heard of Darlene Deibler? She’s also one of my favorites and she has an AMAZING book that I think is sort of similar to Corrie’s.
Oh cool, I’ve never heard of her. I’ll have to check that out!
Kaylin is the oldest child. She’s very protective, loyal and quick. But…
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh you’re fine! 😊
Fynn
“I guess so. Sounds good.” He sauntered up to Lukas and bowed playfully, extending a hand. “May I have this dance?”
Lukas rolled his eyes and shoved Fynn’s shoulder, causing him to take a few stumbling steps backwards.
He bounced right back over to Liv. “My bad.” A laughing glance at Lukas. “Let m…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Awesome choices!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Love ittt. 🙃
I love this! Abbie Emmons just confuses me the more I watch her to be honest…and the internal conflict stuff just wasn’t working for me and was soooo overwhelming, but you did a really awesome job of developing your characters!!
Thanks!
Yeah, she can be kind of vague sometimes. I feel like for me, it tak…[Read more]
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Ruth started the topic Help? in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I have this chapter in my book where my MC (Nahim) is captured by the antag (Vorgan). Instead of directly physically torturing Nahim, Vorgan opts for torturing Nahim’s best friend , Mandin. The idea is to emotionally and possibly mentally break Nahim by watching his friend be hurt.
Nahim is the type where he would rather bear the pain…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah I did. Idk why, I just have been writing snippets in first person present so it was on my mind.
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Ruth replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Okay, I sound like an idiot and feel like one.
This reply is going to be short, I didn’t get to sleep until like four this morning so my thinking braincells are dead.
Shall we take this a different direction? Do you believe that God is not God, unless He is Omnipotent, Omnibenevolent, Omnipresent, and Omniscient?
Is my guess…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Wait, did you say it has to be in first person?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah that’s an interesting idea!
I think we might also have too many locations/dragons, and if we’re already burning out with the first one, I don’t think we’re gonna get very far. I think part of my problem is that I’m terrible with fighting scenes, and even in the scenes where the characters were fighting each other, Kari wasn’t very…[Read more]
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