Liberty

@freedomwriter76

I’m liking this alreadyyy *waits patiently for the other ones* 👀

@freedomwriter76

Awww 😭 It’s so sad but adorable at the same time 🥹

@lightoverdarkness6

I LOVE those aesthetics!!!! They’re soooo goood❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much!!

And joining a new church is a big change!! I’ll pray for you and your family.

Yeah definitely, but it’s been a good one for us since this is exactly where God wants us at the moment.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks, they really are 😊

@grcr

Thank you!!

Yeah, that’s fair. I use more description later on. I imagine my characters pretty vividly in my head, but I don’t always write it out. Typically I sprinkle in bits of description every now and then. Like, I think in the next chapter or so, I mention Ami has blonde hair. For the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ok, let’s do it! Is Pax just chillin’ in the school rn?

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, it is really cool! Not everyone likes to use it, but I find it really helpful in the beginning stages of developing a character.

Lukas 

“W-well, I guess… I guess we’ll all just have to make the best out of the time we do have together.” He smiled softly. “And you could always visit Aletheia. It’s not in its best con…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings

I certainly hope it happens, at least once <3

I forget who it was… someone said there should be a Kingdom Pen conference or something… that would be so much fun!

@jonas

go ahead.

@jonas

I really like the way you put that!

@princesachronicle22

Nahim

“I have no idea. I’m unfamiliar with these people, this planet. Shall we head to the palace? Find answers?”

@everyone

I should probably explain that directly post Nanian war Nahim is gonna be very sensitive to certain things, more so than in the last rp. He will also probably refuse to help the Lillenings at…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Sorry that I haven’t explained this yet, but Nahum’s sword is a green crystal sword. At the moment, it only looks like a sword handle piece, but it can, when activated, form a green glowing blade. Again, I apologize for not specifying. He also has a gun strapped to his thigh.

Nahim

“I know no place called ‘Spires’. I am the…[Read more]

@prinspcesachronicle22

Nahim

Nahim looked at the purple dagger, than at the woman who held it. He saw her as not much of a threat, but he still had his metal hand resting on his sword pommel.

“Warrioress, amon. ” He bowed his head. “I am Lord Nahim Nayhelm, a child of Laxor, son of Master Anoran. You do not look Native, do you have any clue of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 yes she does, XD

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

Nae

Despite her innocent looks and questions about the meanings of words was a Nae that seemed too rarely to come through. She could sense Riker’s fear, sense the commanding, rude presence of his father, sense the quiet, scared nature of the girl in the corner. She stared up at…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks!! Me too 😊😁

@savannah_grace2009

🤣 I love that!!!

Lukas is so loyal though. I just did the Myers-Brigg test on him and he’s an ISFJ-T. (I don’t know if you’re into MBTI types or not XD I just discovered them last year and they have been super helpful)

Lukas

He laughed, a laugh full of mirth. “True, but I… I think he’ll understand. He has Callie after all.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks!!

@esther-c

Love it! No big critiques. Can’t wait to read more!!

Alrighty!! The promised first two chapters! Any feedback is welcome 🙂

Chapter 1
“Wait a coup?”

“Shh, keep your voice down.”

“Hold on, start over.” Everton Barlowe stared down his older brother.

Asher sighed. “Did you not listen the first time?”

“I was stuck on the word ‘coup.’”

Another sigh. “Okay.” Asher tossed dark strands of hair off hi…[Read more]

Sorry if it’s a bit blurry