Liberty

I’m not gonna put a charrie in, since I firstly have no idea what this…*waves hands around* thing is (Hunger?), and secondly, no offense Whaley, but I have a feeling you’d have a tougher time than me pinning down both Realn culture and Alpha!

@whalekeeper

I’ve heard mixed opinions about the first chapter of a book… I used to always be told it needed to start off with action to draw the reader in, but I’ve come to realize the scene needs to be set up well, too. I guess it’s finding the balance between just enough action to hook the reader and a solid foundation of getting to know the…[Read more]

Oh my goodness, guys! I just heard a version of Running with the wolves (again I have no idea how good the person it came from is. Common theme with me. And the version I watched Idt is the original one. It had some old cartoon animation in the background. Wolfwalkers or something) and that song is just Chase’s song!

Literally, when his aunt is g…[Read more]

@loopylin

If we can just get him in a group of twenty preschoolers, maybe he’ll actually show off a bit to kept them quiet, XD.

In my real world, he wouldn’t really even know at this age, but it’s an AU, I can have liberty.

Worked up? Yes, definitely. Sorry @jonas , I should have been more gracious, since you’re right, Grathmere is such that I have never showed for to you than the shadow of fear that is cast upon those who must utter his name, or the doom that comes lurking after one who has the spell of Grath upon him.

@keilah-h

Imma gonna spend a long time…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yesyesyesss 😆 I love this idea so much.

Now i just have to choose which charrie to put in… 😑

Ok, ok, umm…. I think I’mma go with Ev. Cuz… if he gets hurt it’ll probably be more his fault than yours, if you know what I mean. XD

I’m not sure how much you already know about him cuz you’ve seen him in rps… Should I just give you e…[Read more]

Sometimes you gotta feel it out.

Oh and just to clarify, the words that I suggested should be taken out shouldn’t be taken out every time they’re in your prose. It’s just a good rule of thumb to follow, not some law. Just wanted to make that clear. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I was just about to ask how you were doing when I saw this in my inbox! Glad you’re back!!

Um, I don’t think so. It’s a new day though.

@trailblazer I don’t know much about this time period, but I really enjoyed it so far! It does draw you in.

I feel like it’s hard to have character development within one chapter, but I’d be interested to see where this goes! Please tag me if you post more ! 😉

@loopylin

It’s okay. XD, you would giggle in delight at my first reaction when I read that. My surprise was as great as when Axiom asked what tastebuds tasted like when I first joined KP, XD

Yes, shape shifting helps, but before he knew he could shape shift, since the time he was born, he’s always had a fantastical connection with animals. Part…[Read more]

@loopylin

WHAT?! No! Wait, who…

Would you like me to explain Chase’s connection?

@jonas

I’m gonna ignite over this, you have majorly downplayed Grathmere!

Well, just because Grathmere would prefer to kill everyone doesn’t mean he would. For one thing, I doubt he could beat all of our characters, and for another, Koshtin (assuming he’s still in this RP) probably wouldn’t want that.

Grathmere could kill Black Sky if he wished…[Read more]

Oh wait, never mind.

Sorry, just saw @princesachroncile22 ‘s post, and realized that Javan also wears suits and acts very polite and like a gentlemen. Maybe we don’t want two of those ..

My best spy/villain is in prison on Realn, and betrayed Nahim. He’s out of the question.

Grathmere…okay, so he’d be the best spy out of all of mine, except…he’d prefer to kill them all (especially Nahim) so the rp would die pretty quickly. Rigere and Angere might work, but I think the best might be Javam Ram.

What do you guys think?

@keilah-h

If Snake is a famed person, and you entered a villain from years after his death, would not the culture by then have maybe painted his image like that of the most desirable? For instance, many Greek hero depictions follow the most desirable physical and spiritual traits of the time.

@whalekeeper

Sorry, pressed the button prematurely.

Chase (continued)

His aunt. He had an aunt. For real. Legally. The sister of his father.

No. 

He wanted to be Chase Duke Marshall, not Chase Duke, charge of Ms. Duke. He didn’t want to be back in his father’s family, for all he knew all of them were bad blood. His father had died. Dead.…[Read more]

@loopylin

It’d take a lot to get Chase to join, but maybe he will.

@whalekeeper

Don’t worry. I had never written Chase POV before this either, and Jr is a confused mess. I knew how Nar would be, though I also had never written her POV, but Jr is like…trying to describe the taste of mango without saying mango. Nearly impossible! Sorry, I…[Read more]