Liberty

@savannah_grace2009

Oh Sara- since we were talking about summer camps, I’d love to hear what your camp is like! One of the stories I’m working on currently started with two girls at summer camp who became friends and decided to be pen pals after they left… and the plot has sort of taken its own turns from there, lol!

But anyway, I don’t want…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ok, these are just some of my initial thoughts as I was reading through it.

– I liked the action scene where the boys are watching the fighting; that drew me in. I’d say the first part of the chapter didn’t pull me in as quickly, though. Some of the dialogue felt a little bit like it was just there to fill in the story. I know…[Read more]

and I know there are a lot of “Pirate” novels out there, but this will still be historical-fiction more than anything.

It’ll show more of the realities of piracy, rather than the glamorized piracy that really isn’t realistic, and will also be a book that will show the realities/harshness of the British Royal Navy in the 1700s, and the brutality…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h @rae @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

What began as something for me and my siblings to try for fun has become a book idea.

I made an aesthetic for the MMC (Male Main Character) of this new book idea…hehe.

Y’all, I loved him the minute I created him😂💖💖

Soooo,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

OK, fun fact, I have read everything on here from day one of Kingdom Pen!! (It was a lot to read but completely worth it!)

Even all that cringy writing I posted two years ago?? 🫠🫣

What does everyone do on here beside waiting to ambush new members with a slew of questions?

😂😂

post scenes and break hearts. That’s what I do. And…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Never…never be strong enough but…but… Chase closed his eyes, turning away a little bit, afraid that the pictures and memories flashing through his brain would come out in his eyes. Who else is going to help all those people? Those kids that are just like me. I have powers, I need to use them…and there’s the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas bit his lip, unsure of what to say or do next. He had no way to relate to what Liv was going through. But he had to comfort her somehow. He gently directed her towards the bench, sitting down beside her. He kept his arm around her shoulders.

“C-can I…” His words caught his throat and he suddenly rethought what…[Read more]

WOW!! awesome! Thank you so much for y’all’s help. I only have one chapter in a place where I would call it more then ideas. (I just started the book today. I’ll have to put more of it there later. I can’t wait to hear feedback from other authors!

🤣🤣🤣

@stephie

This time I will participate and will not forget!!! Lol XD

@esther-c

*also sitting in a bean bag chair across from you and Sara, but with lemonade instead of tea*

You can join the conversation if you want lol, I think it sort of reached a lull anyway.

@savannah_grace2009

You’re almost at the climax?!

*me still trying to figure out the beginning* *distant sobbing*

Great job!

Yeahhh, sort of, lol.

Girl, just take your time. This book has been pretty easy for me to write, but some of my other ones, not so much. 😂

And oh my goodness…do I want to know????!?!?!

Maybeee…. 👀 I will gladly share…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You could put however much you want to in there! If you’re doing more than a chapter at a time, it might be easier to just put a link to a document in there (if you’re okay with that), but when I did it, I just did sections at a time (I didn’t have them portioned into chapters yet, just scenes). It’s really however you want to do it.

@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer

*sits in a bean bag chair contentedly watching your conversation with tea and cookies*

Ok, so, sorry if it seems like I’m asking the same thing over again, but this seems a little too good to be true. lol.

So, i am currently writing a novel right this minute. If I created a WIP in the novel critiques section, could I put the first chapter there and y’all give me feedback, and then the second chapter and so forth, or is that not…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey…I know I should be patient…but I was wondering when you’re doing another Lukas RP? Sorry…I was just wondering.
I know you’re probably busy, so no rush! 🤣😊😁”

I was just about to do that, lol!

Lukas 

Lukas stood, opening his mouth to speak, but no words coming out. He swallowed hard and placed himself in front of Livia, wai…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You should write devotionals or something…you  have some really great advice!

Haha maybe I should try it sometime! I tend to ramble though so I’ll have to learn how to say things more clearly and concisely lol. I haven’t really seriously considered writing anything non-fiction before.

Yes! I did that too! I’m so glad I star…

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Oh yes, thank you.

So wait, I could submit a book I’m working on in one of the Forums and y’all would give me feedback! That’s awesome!! I am always looking for honest critiques and it’s hard to find someone that will do it because they are all afraid of hurting my feelings. Even though I tell them that it’s not hurting but helping. I think it’s…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator

So, I started reading a First Aid and Personal Safety book of my Grandmother’s from the American Red Cross and it has not only good info to help yourself and others in case of an accident but also a lot of potentials all useful stuff for writing too! Like what to do when someone has an injury to the head, definitately will…[Read more]