Liberty

And a cat attacking you?

Unless you have a little demon cat, I don’t think that would really happen.

@the_lost-journal

Okay. So, first off, I was freaked out.

Now, after reading that twice, I’m not.

I mean, how am I going to help you? You don’t even know where I live. And why would you be sending a message on KP during a time like this?

So, I’m going to decided that this is you being horrid, and then tentatively send it and hope I didn’t…[Read more]

@theducktator

Ha! We both have some good brother quotes!

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz and Reid

Reid brightened. “Yes, let’s!” He exclaimed with youthful excitement. “C’mon, Tenz, you love exploring!”

But Tenz remained curled up in the corner, his face buried in Omi’s jacket. “Leave me alone,” he sobbed into the jacket.

Reid sighed, wrapping his tendrils around his brother, completely encasing him.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @jonas @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge

Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Leon crumpled, loosing consciousness. The feather boy had a hurt hand, the girl with hair almost like his own had been flung into a building. Flare was too tired to play anymore. And there were still at least eight more enemies…[Read more]

*My brother hands me bag a rough draft he’d editted for me.*

“There was so much to mark in that. Have fun”

*I groan*

*My brother smirks* “I love being a holy terror”

My brother “I find so much satisfaction in forceful hand clapping. It satisfies my satisfactions needs”

@loopylin

Thank you so much! Yes, I love fancy cursive.

@jonas

How tall are they?

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @raxforge @grcr

leon and Julian — Elderstrand (Group 1)

Leon stood and watched the way Ellis fought, trying to gauge the weakness in the creature. Thing. Knight. Whatever it was.

He didn’t have long to stand there. One of the things was coming for him.

Leon ducked a blow a…[Read more]

@loopylin

Sara—Elderstrand w/ Felicity, Group 1

“You okay?” the girl asked.

Sara nodded. She slid her arm under the girl’s shoulders and helped her lean against a nearby wall. “What are these things?”

@loopylin @jonas @rae @grcr @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Sara — Elderstrand, w/ Group 1

Sara flinched as one of the machines threw the tall girl with white-blond hair against a building. Her head lolled to the side for a moment and then snapped up as the robot started walking toward her.

Sara steeled herself and rushed out from the alley. F…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The Bible does repeatedly say how much God hates lies, and although there are certain situations where His people lie (and are possibly blessed for it?), nowhere in the Bible does it say “Lying is okay, if you’re doing it to save people.”

Wow. I just tagged myself instead of @whalekeeper because of copy-paste 😂 Sorry.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Sorry y’all, I might not be very active on the RP for the next week because I have a debate coming up, so feel free to toss Sara around wherever she needs to be.

Sara — Elderstrand, w/ Group 1

Silver music appeared in Sara’s vision as one of the strangers began playing on some…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle This is why I said I wasn’t certain whether or not I agreed with you because of those situations. I feel like lying goes against what God wants us to do as Christians, but I’m not sure what I would do in those scenarios.

@linus-smallprint @hybridlore

I understand both your points. However, there are many instances in the Bible when God blessed or rewarded people after they told lies to save the lives of innocent people. Sabina brought up two such instances.

And, God has also told people to withhold truth/miss-lead. Like in 1 Samuel 16

The Lord said to Samuel,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not exactly sure if I agree with you about God ever wanting Christians to lie, but I get that you’re voicing your own beliefs and I understand why you don’t want to change it. However, just be aware that it might be a slightly controversial topic.

Anyway, I love the plot twist. Great job with the details leading up to it…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

So, I think I can safely say which scenes you have added in and which ones were in the draft. I’ve run into this same problem several times. If my book is more then a year old when I do the re-writes and big edits, you can always tell what I wrote before and what is added. I think our style and skill develops the more we write,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh. You are not the first I’ve heard to say that, but I don’t mind that you don’t agree. Sabina does voice my own beliefs however, so I won’t be changing this.

I would be interested in your reasons behind why you don’t agree with her/my reasoning. Though keep in mind I won’t be changing this scene, so if you find it a waste of…[Read more]

@rae

Don’t look at me.

My guys are just normal people with some military training.

@whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge @loopylin @jonas

Leon and Julian —Group 1, Elderstrand edge

Julian looked up and his eyes widened. He yanked Leon back. “Look out!”

Leon spun, gripping his sword tightly. His eyes and mouth opened in shock. “What are t…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the best ones yet!!

I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?

This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)

Very well done.