Liberty

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

@koshka

Gotcha.

If it’s PTSD in particular I don’t have much. I have research on gas trauma from WW1, but otherwise I haven’t got a ton. I do have heaps of info on things happening during the war. Here’s two I have bookmarked.

h ttps://www.history.com/articles/history-of-ptsd-and-shell-shock

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s651JQxSPlU

@stephie

lol.

*takes a cupcake*

*thinks*

Ok. The problem with Bubble Wrap is that it’s kinda single time use. Two or three good hits in a fight and several spots will be very thin. A good gambeson would basically be multi-use bubble wrap. The popping sound could be fun though.

@liberty

Black horse for a black rider.

What can I say?

@liberty

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

😂

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
November 25th
The Empire

To Wolf, Peter, and the Church in Landstraten,
Greetings in Christ.

Our time in the Capital has been one filled with blessings and the grace of God. We have a sm…

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@rae

That ending won’t leave me alone!!!! Now that I’ve had time to really think about it….. man, it’s good. A delayed hit, but a hard one when it gets ya! 🤣

@hybridlore

No prob! You are 100% last though. 🤣

No wait…. Liberty hasn’t comment yet.

Never mind, you are 90% last. 😝

 

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

Yeah.. poor kid.

What do you think of Marius?

@rae

I saw that coming….. sort of.

I didn’t think he’d go back. I thought he would be killed in a fight.

I’m not sure what to think of that. Hmm.I like it, but almost feel doubtful for liking it.

The opening scene with Jenna and Baron may need a little work. It was very intimate and immediately led me to think that they were married.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good. Sorry, I was at co-op and then had a lot of notifs when I got back so it was a little overwhelming.

Whatever happened to the prince. . . *shudders* Creepy. Hopefully Leon and Julian will get to talk to him soon.

@ellette-giselle @hybirdlore @theducktator @keilah-h

The Final Story.

Please note that I might drastically change this one later since I’m not 100% happy with it, but I’ve been changing and playing with this story for so long now that I feel like I need to post it, gather your thoughts (tips for how to make the story better and criticism very…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know. It’s awful. XD

@whalekeeper

That’s terrible. Praying!! 🙏

@whalekeeper

Some of these were more “research inspired by books” than research for books.

• Dead bodies can bleed at the mouth and nose if moved after the blood pools.
• Although black was a much sought after color of fabric in the middle ages, we don’t have many examples that survived to today, as the dyes used to make a solid black were…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Oooooo, so are MC 2 and the villain related perhaps???

Love Alden’s boots. XD

Very intrigued indeed…

@ellette-giselle

Sure!

@linus-smallprint

Hip Hip!

@koshka

Cool! I’ll take a look through my collection and pass on anything i find!

Nooo…. I don’t think I actually did. I remember you telling me you had a sketch, but I don’t seem to have one in my emails. You could email it to me again if you don’t mind!