Liberty

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@keilah-h

How about accidental astronauts and rogue test pilot. So yeah. XD

Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Signing in for the long haul. I can look for rogue grammar and suspicious word choices.

Code key: nuanced syntax.

@koshka

Perfect!

@ellette-giselle

Agreed. We could let it move at whatever pace it can without needing to flip back 392764683 pages.

Yes! I haven’t had time to open it up yet (word is on the computer) but I’m hoping to in the next hour (we got an extended lunch break today!!!!).

@linus-smallprint

Yeah. Dented up my pretty blue car. 😢

@linus-smallprint

wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱

I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32

@linus-smallprint

No kidding.

Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄

@linus-smallprint

I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.

@koshka

Oh yes, an email thread would be best.

Oh, did you see that I have a chapter of the first book out?

I greatly needs your opinion!!

I could let him meet the mid-arc Leoron.

*Brain glitches*

@ellette-giselle

Yes!!

Maybe we should throw them together in an RP…but I don’t really have time right now for a real one. *Gazes forlornly at the Fantasy School*

Maybe in an email thread. That way we don’t have to work with a school system or wander a Castle.

Hmm. If we both have time (which is a very big if). Otherwise they can just hear…[Read more]

@koshka

*Screams and dances in a circle*

OH MY WORD!!!!!!!!

I so want Leo to meet Cass now. Those two would get along so well.

and all the world would suffer for it.

@ellette-giselle

You might want to see these.

@linus-smallprint

Sounds good.

@linus-smallprint

haha… yeah. Uh, it went through some more rewrites. Again.

Okay then, sounds good.

Shall i still tag you, or do you want to just let me know when you’re back on?