Liberty

@the_lost-journal

Lol

thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!

Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD

THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!

Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant!  Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!!

@rae

Oh man!!

I’ll be praying, Ruth! Please keep us updated!

I had a consultation with my doctor yesterday since my bloodwork results finally came in. I have lymes AGAIN. It came as a little bit of a surprise, since I’ve not found many ticks on me this year, but ticks are sneaky things. *Sigh* so here I go, going on a month of antibiotics in SUMMER. Not looking forward to it, as I do rowing/crew, and I have…[Read more]

I like y’all’s quotes…

I was cleaning the house a few days ago, and as usual my brain wandered down more rabbit trails than I can count. I ended up with this quote from nowhere:

She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.

@hybridlore

hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?

yes, I designed all of it.

@ellette-giselle

The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?

I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore

I made some edits on the cover after some of the feedback I got.

@keilah-h

Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.

You should totally try that!

@keilah-h

I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD

@theducktator

Lol, it’s still in the works. 😉

@the_lost-journal

those are funny. I just did my own because I was in the car and didn’t have access to my quote folder so I did some from my own book because I knew I wouldn’t accidentally misquote them. XD

@hybridlore

lol. Maybe.

Glad it was helpful!

@ellette-giselle

Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷

Thank you so much!!

@hybridlore

Lovely. You disabled copy and paste on the doc. Now I have to do it all the hard way. XD

Okay, feedback answers.

OVERALL

What was your overall impression of the story?

Not sure entirely what you are looking for, but I walked away feeling really excited for the next book and also really refreshed as this is one of my…[Read more]

@koshka

Aw thanks!!!

Would you agree, @power ?

Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?

@ellette-giselle

Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.

@keilah-h

Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?

Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!

Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.

Good thing you looked. XD

I already found a typo.

And something wonky is up with his outline…..

@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @theducktator     @grcr     @whalekeeper    @power    @hybridlore

Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.

Any thoughts?

https…[Read more]