Liberty

@savannah_grace2009

Oh you’re fine! 😊

Fynn 

“I guess so. Sounds good.” He sauntered up to Lukas and bowed playfully, extending a hand. “May I have this dance?”

Lukas rolled his eyes and shoved Fynn’s shoulder, causing him to take a few stumbling steps backwards.

He bounced right back over to Liv. “My bad.” A laughing glance at Lukas. “Let m…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome choices!!

@rae

Love ittt. 🙃

@savannah_grace2009

I love this! Abbie Emmons just confuses me the more I watch her to be honest…and the internal conflict stuff just wasn’t working for me and was soooo overwhelming, but you did a really awesome job of developing your characters!!

Thanks!

Yeah, she can be kind of vague sometimes. I feel like for me, it tak…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah I did. Idk why, I just have been writing snippets in first person present so it was on my mind.

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I sound like an idiot and feel like one.

This reply is going to be short, I didn’t get to sleep until like four this morning so my thinking braincells are dead.

Shall we take this a different direction? Do you believe that God is not God, unless He is Omnipotent, Omnibenevolent, Omnipresent, and Omniscient?

Is my guess…[Read more]

@rae

Wait, did you say it has to be in first person?

@jonas

Yeah that’s an interesting idea!

I think we might also have too many locations/dragons, and if we’re already burning out with the first one, I don’t think we’re gonna get very far. I think part of my problem is that I’m terrible with fighting scenes, and even in the scenes where the characters were fighting each other, Kari wasn’t very…[Read more]

@jonas

Sorry, didn’t see your post.

I like it!

If no one has a spy…

I have a charrie name Javam Ram who can act very gentlemanly, but I already have a lot of charries in here…

@jonas @savannah_grace2009

I’m brainstorming while listening to epic music for once, and it’s not Working rn. *Changes music to one of my fav SABATON’s*

Oh, also, I found my sheet about Noranay, so I might change her a little bit, and Nahim’s voice is going to sound like grating or screeching metal for a while.

Nora

• Nora gets impatient with…

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@vinagirl

I’m not entirely sure how I want to close out the story. At this point I know they’re gonna get married but I don’t know if I want to try to add another conflict in there or something or just wrap it up. I also don’t think weddings were the same back then; I think they were usually more of a quiet family celebration but I haven’t…[Read more]

@vinagirl maybe #LIBERT?

@trailblazer Looks good! Excited for the next part!

@beth-torres

Awesome!

@beth-torres

Okay! I might not be able to do that much, especially in Genesis XD. Maybe we could do something like one or two chapters a day for the whole week? Honestly, it doesn’t matter what chapter we’re exactly on, but it would still be cool to do it together! Maybe we could even discuss stuff that stood out to us in the…[Read more]

@ellie-wingfeather
Hi! I’m hybridlore, a homeschooler and science fiction writer! It’s nice to meet you! I’m assuming by your tag that you like the WFS?

@beth-torres

That sounds fun! Maybe we could start on the new year, and just start on Genesis?

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @vinagirl

OK, this segment is basically the farthest I’ve gotten in the story so far. Lmk if you have any suggestions for things that could happen from here on out!

That summer marked the beginning of a new season for me as Albert and I formally entered into a courtship. Albert walked me home from church nearly…[Read more]

@rae

Oh goodness. A genre I don’t write in? Haha this might be interesting. We’ll see if I can come up with something.

@highscribeofaetherium

I actually prefer sparkling water over soda… I’m not a huge fan of the usual soda flavors. Like I’ll drink them, but give me a good La Croix or Izze any day. I’m also type 1 diabetic, so I only really use soda if my blood sugar is low and I need something to bring it up quickly.

@rae @jonas @beth-torres

I’m still here… I’m just not great with fighting scenes, but Kari is currently with Carrie and Silas.