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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
Oooooo I LOVE this!!!
Ok, one thing,
You see, Cass has a subconscious drive to pump himself up. He feels insecure about himself, so he manipulates situations in order to get people to look up to him or get praise. He doesn’t fully realize that he’s doing that to Sef, but it’s all a selfish desire to get those feelings of being important and a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Aw, that’s so sweet. It’s always so fun to find a character you can relate to!
Ah, thanks for the heads up! I’ll go see right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you so much!
You like Sabina? Do you see redemption in her, or are you just hoping?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow
As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.
By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Ah, yeah, I posted it several days ago and was like, “wonder where everyone is….” then I realized I didn’t tag y’all. lol.
Haha, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Sabina…. poor girl. You can see she loves her brother dearly, and she was very frightened for him. But, she also feels betrayed. Poor thing, she’s so tangled up…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Dystopian Worldbuilding in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉
Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]
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Esther's profile was updated 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh no that’s ok! I’m glad you like it!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oooh, he looks so cool!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
What did I say! I knew there was something more to Eloy! I really like him now.
Cass is a jerk.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings
Aw, thank you so much, y’all!
Wow Min, that’s pretty good! I don’t know if I thought of him as that solemn in my mind, but maybe he is! lol. He is my FAVORITE LOTR character because he is THE BEST!
Also, odd question, does anyone know why I no longer get an email when I get tagged? It happened all the…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
Riker will be fineeeeeeeeeeeeee. Eventually
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@rae @savannah_grace2009 Y’all don’t come after me, but Riker may soon be dealing with more than just an infection in his arm in Broken Shackles since he’s now on the run😬
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I NEED RIKER UPDATES!!!!!
Also, Riker, I finished my 1973 First Aid and Personal Safety book from the American Red Cross and have a copy of the 29th American edition of Gray’s Anatomy (not the TV show, the book of anatomy) on my shelf, plus I have saved articles about injuries, so you better believe I’m going to tell you you ARE NOT OKAY and…[Read more]-
Has anybody actually tried to read the Gray’s Anatomy book? I tried reading a chapter on lymph which I’ve always Ben fascinated with, but had to stop not even a page in because I needed a mental break! Sheesh, Gray didn’t leave anything out,vdid he?
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Been not Ben. autocorrect.
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Interesting! I haven’t read that.
also, you’ll have to wait on Riker updates. I’m writing a scene now👀👀👀
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@freed_and_redeemed
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME-
Shhhhhhhhhhh. He’ll be fineeeeeeeee
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He’s going to LOSE AN ARM!!!
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Geez, Whaley😂😂 Who do you think I am??? XD
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Ummmmm idk an SURGEON WITH A KNIFE
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😂😂😂😂 you good, Whaley?? I’m a little concerned😂
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Oh no! Riker, don’t be stupid! Go to the hospital or something!
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Idk if he’ll listen to you😬🫣
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I want to smack some sense into him, but I’m concerned that would worsen the problem.
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@theducktator Unarguably so 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 2 months ago
@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009
Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Also, does she have a widow’s peak?
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Does Feather have straight or slightly curly hair?
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