Liberty

@koshka

*stumbles from beneath an insurmountable snow ball*

I LIVE!

Hidden words in world unknown gleamed in her blade. Winifrith tuned it and watched the reflected fire dance across the ceiling. A blade of Elisai, forged in the breath of the Lighted One. Some things were too sacred for wonder to grasp. 

She sheathed it home by her…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Looks like this section is a hit!

I mostly use ESV, but sometimes I’ll use another version if I find it translates the Hebrew/Greek better for the particular verse/passage.

I’m glad you like that scene. It’s one of my fav.

Spring Fever is a real thing. Especially among the teenage guys at our church.

lol.

@the_lost-journal This sounds like a super cool idea! Unfortunately, I don’t think I’ll participate this time—I’m already not really keeping up with the fantasy RP—but I may check in on it to watch what happens.

@grcr Praying as well!! *virtual hug* 🤗

@ellette-giselle

Leo

Rory pulled the gloves from his pocket. Gave a nervous laugh. “Yeah, I have them. What do you want me to do? climb down the wall with them?”

“Yup.” Leo smiled and shrugged. “Unless you have a better idea. I’m not leaving you here, kid.”

Rory’s green eyes widened. The kid glanced towards the window and shuddered. No won…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?

By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?

Two.

One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]

@raxforge @theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @the_lost-journal

Ah! You all hit me with a snowball!

So I wrote a short story

The True Magic of Christmas
 

December 25th, 1914.

I dread the date. Usually I would be at home, home with little Henry and Mum, but not this year. I will miss them more than usual tomorrow. Oh, if only this war had never…

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Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!

Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”

Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

6 snowballs…? Wow, Whaley. That’s… intense. XD

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Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)

Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION

Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…

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@linus-smallprint

btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉

@liberty

Oh my goodness.

You’ve ruined me, girl!

oh I couldn’t breathe! I’m crying right now. Oh man, that was such a good, good story! I love the tragedy of it!

Tell your brother he did an amazing job!

@theducktator

I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.

Also consider if each c…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, whoops. I forgot I got hit by a snowball.

Just a sec.

Liam didn’t seem to agree, but he let the matter go.

They were silent a moment. Then, Liam started coughing. It was a small cough at first, but it grew harsher and stronger. “Easy, easy,” Werner said, carefully helping Liam to sit up. He whipped out his handk…

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@the_lost-journal

Thanks so much for coming up with this! It looks like a fun idea.

I may not be able to participate, we’ll have to see. I have a lot going on right now. 😉

@grcr

Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕

“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭41‬:‭10‬ ‭

“I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.

I knew he was going to get caught.

I really liked this chapter! I like it a whole lot!

Poor Stripe, I feel bad for him. Perfume is awful!! Especially ON YOUR NOSE!

Okay, the similarities thing

The only thing that stood out to me as being…[Read more]

@loopylin

And blond guy.

If this was meant to refer to Baron, he has white hair. Though, right now it will look silver because of the moon

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Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, about to follow Fel.

“My name isn’t Baron!” Brutus hissed, pushing Flare away. “Whatever you think you saw, you were wrong!”

Brutus’s attention  was then caught by the girl who he was going to follow, He took her “try to keep up” as a little…[Read more]