Liberty

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.

@theducktator

That’s vicious. And brilliant.

… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

@ellette-giselle

Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

…

Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!

And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂

@liberty

Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD

Deductions…

He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.

He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, that’s just beautiful! The pictures and messages are most of them sad/dark, but it’s so aesthetic that I keep coming back to look at it. You did such a good job bringing the different pictures together.

Love them both! The character claims do fit them very well.

Their stories are just… Sniff. I really want more Leon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty  @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!

The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th 
The Empire

We are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…

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@freed_and_redeemed

*shuts mouth and stews silently.*

🤣

No, it’s really good. You did a great job. 🥰

@loopylin

Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.

Chase

Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭

Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶

Didn’t get much done, lol. Got distracted by looking at movie times with my brother XD

Ope, almost forgot, going toooo…. :50

Sprinting to hopefully do something writing related… I haven’t really written since the end of March 🫣🫣

@theducktator

I know, I’m sorry. 😞 It would have been cool to maybe meet you in person.

@theducktator

Yes, we were able to get a rental in the other state, not Indiana.

@theducktator

Ahh. Yeah, I get what you mean.

I think so. Not totally sure yet, but my mom’s talked to the tutors there, and we’re thinking that we will. I don’t know if Challenge 4 will be as fun as Challenge 3, though. @whalekeeper, what did you think of Ch4?

@whalekeeper

That’s awesome! I can sympathize.

Some other question ideas:

Will Snoden and/or Hewson be in this next book?

When did he start writing stories?

What’s one writing habit to avoid?

Does he think his connection to the Zulu tribes inspire anything in Green Ember? If so, what?

Who was Wilfred’s first wife/family he lost?

Will there…[Read more]

@theducktator

😝

Remind me again what the prompt was? I can barely remember.

@whalekeeper @ducktator

Nice. Yeah, saying goodbye was sad, but I’m kinda glad it’s over.