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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@theshadow Hey! How are you doing? I haven’t talked to you in a while.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@theducktator lol love the pfp and new name!
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“The mask was inherited from my mentor.” Despite Leander’s agitated tone, Gabriel’s voice remained the same calm, measured tone. “I also object to you going alone. You are too reckless. You wouldn’t last a day in my line of occupation. If you so wish, we can go just the two of us, and leave everyone else…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed    @hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!!!
It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
Gabriel sighed. “People don’t follow princes who make fun of them. Also, I advise you be careful what you say under your breath. I have sharp ears.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@keilah-h   @linus-smallprint   @hybridlore
Okay, here’s a question for y’all.
So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Well, first off, this is Julian we’re talking about. Leon had more understanding for them. Second, this is really their first time going through something like this. The last time was in Ardenta, and Ardentans have a certain brute stubbornness and willingness to just hang on that a lot of other cultures don’t. (That’s part of why…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t know who fell apart worse, them or the church in Clonabay.
Julian’s sermon is fine, but I think he needs to remind them more of what they are fighting for. What the reward in heavan will be.
mkay, that works. I’ll try to pull some of that in.
Have these three actually been participating in idol worship, or is J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hmm, the problem is, I’m trying not to drag things like “greek” and “hebrew” in because that muddies the world a bit because it is technically an alternate reality.
Well, it’s a bit of a chopped up version (due to space. Who made the rule of 100 characters anyways?!) But it’s a Chesterton quote that reads,
“The great march of…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“I’m called the Protector.” His voice remained the same, and he made no movement to bow or show any recognition to Leander’s princely status.
I know, it’s short, but Gabriel doesn’t talk too much unless he’s in a banter mood, which does occasionally happen.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
“If we stick as a group, it will be easier to keep others from falling to harm, but it also means we will cover less ground and it will be therefore longer before we can find enough of those purple balls to send everyone home.” The Protector ignored Leander’s last question. “Sticking as a group will keep…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I was watching a YouTube video, checked my notifs quick and there it was
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The Protector-Gabriel
The Protector looked at the vines, then at the strange cat-like person in front of him. “I don’t mind at all.” He spoke with an even tone, as if every word was measured. “But please be less reckless.” Even though he issued a request, his voice remained the same, showing no emotion. His voice was as blank…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
OOOOHHHHHH! Let the fun begin *evil villain laugh*
One sec, I’ll write and rp right now…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@anyone
The Protector-Gabriel
The Protector watched the events unfold in silence, sitting comfortably on a rock. Through the rune over his left eye, for a split second, he could see his little cottage home where the Fourth Protector waited through the purple ball. Once the boy went through, he saw his home no more.
The Protector sighed. This…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Are you saying I did a good job at describing him?!?!?! YAY!!!!
Yes, you did a good job. Gold star: ⭐
But that’s not to say the that his actions are safe….
Lol. Yet another thing that will make him and Gabriel clash. Gabriel also will plan out his moves, but he’s very careful. In his line of hobby, work, duty, wha…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Just for these reasons:
Exactly. I kinda saw some of those points coming when I read Leander’s description.
In Character Party, we had literal fights between characters. We resolved things a little, and no one died, but my poor Nahim had a concussion, and the other characters…oh Zaren ( @highscribeofaetherium )and Nahim had a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Gotcha. You might want to try to clarify the definition a little more, but I would see what others like Linus think.
What does your signature mean, by the way?
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@hybridlore Thanks for reaching out. I’m doing pretty good, although these last two weeks of school are driving me crazy lol. How are you?
I’m glad! Yeah, you’re so close!
When do you get off? In two weeks? Interesting, because I think the kids around here get off this week.
I’m doing pretty good too! We just moved a few states over and so we’re still settling in but I’ve been doing pretty good overall. 😊
@hybridlore Man, those kids are lucky lol. My school technically gets off the 6th, when exams finish.
Oh wow, how was the move? That sounds like a lot, I’ll be praying for you and your family.
Oh, gotcha. It was pretty good—we’re still settling in like I said, but it’s been a few weeks and our new neighborhood is pretty nice. It’s a lot busier than we’re used to though.
Thank you!
@hybridlore Your welcome! Well, Hopefully you’ll get used to it soon.