Liberty

@keilah-h

No problem.

I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?

@loopylin

And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.

Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!

@esther-c

I’ll be praying!! Have fun at volleyball!

And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭

Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…

First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.

Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I know! Poor guy!

@ellette-giselle

Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

Chapters 12-13!!!!

@loopylin

AHa! That works… I lost my place too…

Now let’s see if I can get back into my charrie’s head.

Viktor

Lab partners. Right.

Viktor shuffled his notes into his textbook as slowly as he could, making sure each page was smooth and even. His old habit to duck his head out of friendships cut again. A quick glance at Lois didn’t help.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*Gasp*

Wow. I like Lucille Barnes. The whole scene was beautiful to read, although I’d like to slap a few kids silly. The descriptions were clear and lovely.

Poor Lucille.

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Two new chapters!

@whalekeeper

Wow. Poor Lucille.

@ellette-giselle

Got it.

@whalekeeper

Aw, Lucille… I like Lucille.

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it have an important part in the plot/worldbuilding?

Those other kids are bullies. 😠 The struggle of wills in the fight was really good though. I liked how you focus on her not throwi…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. 🙃

Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.

@ellette-giselle

Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

@hybridlore

what was sweet?

No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.