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Starshiness replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Thank you!! Haha yesss there will be a lot of playful banter between Raven and Keston in upcoming chapters 😌
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Starshiness replied to the topic Hello Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 4 years ago
@loopylin Hello there! I’m Starshiness, it’s great to have you here!! Ooo fantasy, one of my favorite genres! Do you write mainly short stories or are you working on any novels, poetry, fanfic, flash fic, or any other genre?!
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Starshiness replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
YASSS GREAT IDEA FOR A FORUM!!! Imma go scan through my main WIP, Raven’s Quest, and pick out all the best scenes now 😀
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“How did you do that?”
Keston swiftly sheathed his sword and retrieved the two blades, winking roguishly at Raven.
“They say the best weapon is the one not expected.”
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Raven grinned impishly at her companion. “Comes i…
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Starshiness replied to the topic Scribles from a Natalian Scribe (Green Ember Fanfics) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
AHHHHH GREEN EMBER FANFICS?!!!! @elishavet-pidyon GREAT IDEA!!!! Imma read all this right away I’M SO EXCITED, I hardly know anyone who has read Green Ember 😭😭😭. I read all four books and loved them, which is something considering that I usually can’t stand books where my FAVORITE CHARACTER DIES AT THE END (won’t say who that is for the sake of…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Howdy! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 4 years ago
@microphage6032 Hellooooo there!! Nice to meet ya, I’m Eliana 🙂 @freedomwriter76 is your sister?? Coolio!! That’s awesome that you write comics and fanfics; that’s one genre I never really tried my hand at… what kind of fanfics do you write??
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Starshiness posted an update 4 years ago
EYO I’M BACK Y’ALL!!! Ugh I have had WAY TOO LITTLE time to write over the summer and then college classes but now I’m getting into the groove of things and hope to be online more :))
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Starshiness replied to the topic Hey, Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
@pen_for_christ205 ANOTHER ONE WHO LIKES CHUCK BLACKKKKK!!!!! Can we please start a fanclub for Kingdom and Knights of Arrethtrae?? It looks like there are enough of us to begin one… 😂 Do you have a favorite book or character from the Kingdom or Knights of Arrethtrae series?
Anyway, welcome to Kingdom Pen!! It’s great to have you here!
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Starshiness replied to the topic Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 years, 1 month ago
@sunny421 Oooh, if it includes a medievalish fantasy theme with kings and queens, princes, and princesses… it’s an automatic thumbs up from me!! And this sounds like a great storyline! Since you have two main characters, are you going to have like a chapter from Luke’s perspective, then the next chapter from Princess Dorothy’s, and so on until…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
(Oh, and Guilty is an a w e s o me song, great choice of background 😉)
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Starshiness replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
XDXD
Haha see with me it’s just the opposite. I can write some pretty good action scenes but my emotional scenes… ehhh they need work 😂. I did!! Actually was just writing out a response to that haha. Girl, that scene is DEEP! And so meaningful! I love getting a peek at Adrian’s inner turmoil, his questioning to see if the…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I pity the person who would dare hate on Riker XD
Ahhhhhh girl you are melting my heart with these scenes they are so beautiful and full of EMOTION my goodness I absolutely love that last scene sm 😭
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Starshiness replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 2 months ago
@ampeterson03 Haha thanks! And I think I will! 🙂
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Starshiness replied to the topic Packing Punches! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AHHH yes, I definitely agree with you there! I love the artistic tidbits found in the Bible, and how it has some of the best imagery and patterns for writing. I mean take the book of Psalms, how much more BEAUTIFUL poetry can you get than that?!
Sweet!
Oh I love that! The paragraph is very short and concise so the use of the…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 2 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Hmm I do see what you mean there. Since I finished this piece, I kept getting the feeling that there was *something* not quite right; maybe this is it! Tysm for the feedback!!
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Starshiness replied to the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Aw thanks! (Much appreciated XD)
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Starshiness replied to the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 2 months ago
(pssstt! All those who have been here for a while… who do I tag for this kind of thing?? 🤷🏽♀️😂)
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Starshiness started the topic "A New Normal" in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 years, 2 months ago
I have a few short stories that I’ve been wanting to get some feedback on… I’ll start with this one for now. It’s not my best, kinda a literary experiment lol, so I’m all ears for whatever critiques y’all might have 🙃
“His eyes weren’t normal.
Then again, neither was much else about him.
He doubtless looked no different than any other t…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Yessss same! I think in my main two WIP I only have… one… parent who survives the story XD. It really does!! With the parents not there, the character has to buck up and take on more responsibility than he might have before; being on their own molds the character into a different sort of person, something quite common in the…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Merch much? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 2 months ago
That sounds epic! I personally would like to see text designs on t-shirts; monotone is nice, but I do love a good pop of color!
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