KydonAndWillow

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Yeah, of course!

@kydonandwillow

Hey!! I just read a chapter you posted a while back and it looks really interesting! I’ll probably stick around to read the rewrite. I’m excited!!

And to answer your questions…

First, about magic, I totally respect others’ opinions of not reading or watching stuff like that (like Harry Potter). But my opinion is that stuff l…[Read more]

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I love it! I have the same thoughts as Cloaked Mystery. Also it might help if you spread out the chapter a little more. The events seem to happen really fast, and the reader barely has time to process before the next event happens. Sorry if that doesn’t make sense, I’m not good at explaining what I mean, haha!  Maybe go more into…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Yeah, I figured she wouldn’t go willingly, but wouldn’t it still make sense to try? And yeah, they probably would take Kydon to, but you could have Evander show up in time to get Kydon out or something.

@kydonandwillow

This is ramping up!

WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FAST!!! XD XD

(I have the same question as Cloaked Mystery, why would the twins tell Kydon to come but leave Willow? Was she out?)

@kydonandwillow

Oh boy… what is gonna happen… 😃

Once again, I have one question: Is Willow in the house with Kydon in the first paragraph?

@kydonandwillow

Awesome can’t wait to see what happens next!

One thing that bothers me is, why did the twins separate Kydon and Willow like that? They sent a message to Kydon telling him to come to them, but left Willow behind and at the same time sent Evander to protect Willow. Wouldn’t it have made more sense for them to have had Kydon bri…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Ooooohhh!! This got interesting fast! XD

@kydonandwillow

I love that idea! sounds so intriguing!

I don’t think it’s that cliche, just like @jonas commented earlier. I love the names of your characters!

@kydonandwillow

XXD honestly, I sort of wish I could slow down and read normally sometimes.. it’s just, when I get so caught up in a book I don’t want to lol. But I guess it is a nice skill to have for other things, just I feel like I miss things sometimes. I’m glad I don’t have to read every single word, though.

@savannah_grace2009 @kydonandwillow

Wait y’all read fast too??? Me and my sister read faster than anyone else in my family (mostly because we skim things xD I didn’t know other people did that too!)

@kydonandwillow

Willa is a Black Lab/Border Collie cross. She is a sweetie!

Here’s the link to my WIP: https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

Let me know what you think!

@kydonandwillow

Maybe I should have you make up names for my story, haha! I am terrible at making up names for places, names of people, rivers and stuff like that! I made up the name Azuri, but that’s about the only one. I usually look up “weird names” on google and use what I like.

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Exactly!!!! My little sister HATES reading with a passion too! All she will read is non-fiction about animals and stuff like that. All I read is fiction, so we’re polar opposites! I read about 300 pages in about 3 to 4 hours so I can read about a book per day in the summer. It takes my dad a month to finish a book of the same…[Read more]

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I know! Sometimes I read so much I get “banned” from the library because I don’t spend time with my family when I’m reading, haha!

@kydonandwillow

Okay. That works. If you wanted to, you could probably come up with a “scientific” explanation as well, like having the eye color be linked to some other generic trait that runs in the family.

@kydonandwillow

This is great! I like how things are amping up. One thing I think could be improved is to wait longer before Willow talks. The readers, along with Kydon feel tension from the previous scene, and in my opinion, it would be better to stretch that out instead of resolving it a few paragraphs later. Also, about Kydon and Willow both…[Read more]