Koshka

@koshka @shadowy,cloakedfigure

Ok, thank you! That’s super helpful.

They have kinda opposite personalities and character arcs, but the same interests and tastes in different things.

A good example would be a separate birthday party (*shudder*)

If Ed and Ellie had separate birthday parties that would be so depressing

@koshka

She’s been at the dance practice and she will come to the dorm sometime soon. It’s only been half a day, but they do get anxious when they’re apart for too long.

But I don’t know what being a twin is like. Am I writing it accurately?

@koshka

You’re fine!

Ahh that makes sense!

Beyonders is a middle-grade fantasy trilogy, and it’s quite well-done, but not written from a particularly Christian perspective, (I think the author is Mormon? but it doesn’t greatly affect the story, but a certain character that only appears for a brief time is similar to the oracle of Delphi)

The…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!

I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]

@koshka @freedomwriter76

Eleanor 

She didn’t put up much of an argument, she really didn’t care all too much, she just wanted to get out of here. Marek reached for her hand but she pulled away, she just wasn’t in the right place to be touched. Marek had been nothing but great to her, yet, her dad had been amazing too, one second he made her…[Read more]

@koshka This is really beautiful!

@koshka You can sign up here! 

@koshka You should!!! Everyone’s writing is different and we all need growth – which is one of the main reasons this anthology exists! Is to bring writers an opportunity to grow!

@koshka @freedomwriter76

Okay I’ll RP

Eleanor

She brushed a strand of brown hair behind her ear and turned to the group. She wasn’t having fun here, it was annoying to be surrounded by people she didn’t know or trust. “We’re yet to find a way out of here, so it might be in our best interest to split up,”

“No that’s too dangerous,” Eleanor was…[Read more]

@koshka

OH MY GOSH. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

@koshka

I dabble a little in poetry and honestly have no talent for it, but my favourite verses are the two last. Why? Because it feels right somehow. I would help you out more, but I’m afraid I don’t reckonize your style well. I apologize for how little help I can offer.

I love the freeverse (that isn’t freeverse) poem! 🙂 Absolutely! Tag me when you post that poem that’s giving you grief. @koshka

Goodness me, I thought I replied to you ages ago, @koshka! Sorry! Now that I think about it, I went down a rabbit hole of web searching and trying to figure out what sort of poem it was, and I think I started to write a reply but must’ve never posted it.

Essentially, it’s a rhyming poem, but not a metered one. Some sources consider it free verse,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Oh neat! I’m wrapping up my senior year to go to college! What are you majoring for, if I may ask??
Also, do you mean his newest, the one with the moose? Or different??

@koshka
*curtsies back* Bonjour, madam!
Writing has been slow lately, and I had to scrap Journey to Amber Forest due to some personal reasons, but I’m halfway…[Read more]

@koshka
Homework.
😛

Thanks, @koshka! I love the layered meanings of words too. It was funny because I drafted it so hastily and impulsively that I didn’t even realize the full depth of meaning I had woven into the poem–until I was reading and rereading while editing. It was intentional and yet much of it was subconsciously done.

I just let all of the mixed-up…[Read more]

Thanks, @koshka! That would be great. 🙂

I wrote this poem after my uncle’s passing. He was self-taught on guitar and left a few of the instruments behind (as well as many people who loved him).

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

Marek

Eleanor looked at Jayson’s hand, but Marek knew she wouldn’t shake it. It was one thing for Eleanor to talk to a person it was another to have physical contact (outside of fighting) with that person.

Just as Marek suspected, Eleanor moved her hand away, she didn’t look mad or annoyed but instead just…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka

Eleanor

“Your sister is probably worried about you,” Eleanor teased, smirking at Marek.

“Shh. I think I heard someone.” Leon hushed.

Eleanor shared a glance with Marek and then prepared for a fight. They turned the corner and were faced with two guys. one held a gadget that looked quite odd.

“Who are you?!”  Elea…[Read more]

@koshka

That works for me