Koshka

@keilah-h

Or at least that’s the hight to the window.

@pen_for_christ205

(I’m sorry, I forgot I never responded [why does my brain do this to me?])

Hi! *Enthusiastic wave* good to see you around.

Freedom’s advice is probably better than anything I could give, especially as I’ve never written a conversion scene.

And I will probably be referring to her list myself. =)

@ava-blue

Wow. I’ve never heard of these before. They look wonderfuly helpful.

@godlyfantasy12

Yuppers!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Steeling himself, Vulkasin took the child from Eva, holding her as if she were made of silk and paper. Desperatly trying to avoid waking her he passed her up, making no sudden moves.

He stepped away from the wall. Air filled his lungs. Had he been holding his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

I can hand off Naja and Franz, if you want.

@freedomwriter76

Oh Riker. If anything about what an SS officer is comes out, some of Zlatan’s past as something similar may come to light also.

@godlyfantasy12

HAHAHA!! Nyx is adorable!!!!

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Uh oh. XD Vulk is the only one (besides their Mother) who has ever gotten away with calling him that.

Correct me if I’m mistaken, but I was thinking that the tower had several windows, this one being the lowest, and that they were trying to get to the chambers inside the tower, not the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

I have arrived!

Mikkel

November was obviously in a lot of pain, one hand clamped to the side of his white face.

Three long scars crossed under that hand, their brilliant red jerking at Mikkel’s breath.

After a moment the torrent seemed to fade. The lad’s teary eyes opened.

Phantom…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Blackened stonework, narrow threshold, tall glorious window. The tower at last.

But everyone seemed concerned on how to enter, all gathered round the refuse pile of a door.

Whatever they were trying to do. He had found the window.

It wasn’t high; stretching he could almost…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I Want To Pummel Someone.

Hard.

Ooohhhh………..be glad I’m on the other side of the internet, buster.

And please, what happens next????

@freedomwriter76

You’re making me want to go make collages for all my various MCs, especially Mikkel and Wilkins.

Wait…you haven’t met Wilkins yet…I should definitely do one for him.

Anyway, as Elishavet said, I have marine family too, so Michael already had a special place in my heart. Also, is Asher a submarine captain?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Wowsers y’all. That was a lot more than I expected.

Sorry for not getting on. I try to stay off my phone on weekends.

OH, and @freedomwriter76 ? Michael and Mikkel definitely need to meet, both being marines (although Mikkel would be like ‘Sorry chap, I’m a King’s Mariner’).

@elishavet-pidyon

Exactly! The Bible shows many disturbing things, and that is exactly what they should be. Disturbing, NOT intriguing.

Our writing should show the darkness as what it is, both to give boldness because we know our enemy, and a warning to not be like it.

It matters where your focus is. Remember Lot’s wife? Although her feet were…[Read more]

@ava-blue

I’m randomly jumping in, but I did read it so…

For one, that’s a looong paragraph.

For two, there’s a typo in “If I only I could get a backdrop behind der verflixte Elche.”

Anyway, it sounds interesting! Is there more to the story?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…

He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.

Never lost control.

Zlatan closed his eyes.

Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.

Blink. Was that h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.

He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.

“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”

The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

For a moment silence reigned.

Mikkel blinked.

“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

White hot fury.

Freezing passion.

Smell of blood.

The world went red.

.

.

He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.

“I’m sorry.”

He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.

Riker looker up his eyes wide.

“I’m sorry.”

@wilder-w
Let it shine
Let it shine
Let it shine!
Uh, =)