Kathleen

@elanor I play piano and do ballet! I write mainly crime, fantasy, and school life stories.

@elfwing Ey thanks! I’ll take a look at it soon!

Hi! I have a fantasy WIP and I wanted some feedback on some of it if that’s okay…

Warning: I’m like how Gandalf described hobbits discussing family trees, when it comes to my world; “They can sit upon the edge of ruin and discuss family connections to the ninth degree…” something like that XD

What kind of Wip stuff can I post on this?…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Yeah my friends call me a tragedy writer but they also say the reason they like my writing is because some of the good guys die and not just the bad guys, so I stick to my plot mwahahaha I is evil

Ohhhhh thanks!!! I haven’t tried thesaurus before, not sure why, I’ll totally try that! thanks!

I also use sob/sobbing a lot XD and whimper,…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Thank you so much! That was very helpful. 😀

@devastate-lasting

Thank you so much for the input! And, by the way, this is off-topic, but your profile picture is gorgeous!

@lewilliams

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the input. I still have two years till graduation, so I’ve got some time to think and pray, thankfully.…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Well, I’m sure it’s awesome! 😉

@elfwing

*sighs happily* Emotional scenes!!! I love them… 😛

So, a thesaurus is a great place to start when searching for verbs and phrases that describe emotion well (The thesaurus on my computer is my constant companion and regular helper. You might want to consider double-checking the meanings if you use a word from there though, just to…[Read more]

@elanor

Hi, Lilly! Welcome to the forum! I’m Lydia. 😀

Ah, yes, J.R.R. Tolkien is the best! (In my humble opinion, he was one of the greatest novelists ever. 🙂) Love your signature and profile picture, by the way.

Here are a few questions for you, if you feel like answering them:

1) Who are your top three favorite authors?

2) What is your…[Read more]

@ariel-f

Hi, Ariel! Welcome to the forum! I’m Lydia. 😀

Ooo, the genres you write in sound like loads of fun! I’m a dabbler when it comes to writing genres, so I’ve written something in most (Except mystery… Though mystery is a component in my main WIP). I’ve written a short story set in the future, and it was a lot of fun! I might have to…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Hello Kadotake!

ooo I like saying that out loud, I’m grinning like a Cheshire cat, that’s such a cool alias!!

Yay!! someone else who loves ducks! that’s so cool you have ducks!

I have been attempting writing fantasy and getting stuck on chapter one since I was… oh, grief, eight? I started getting somewhere about a year…[Read more]

@elfwing Hi! My name’s Grace (you can call me Kadotake if you want though, it’s my online alias 😄). Great to have you here on the forum! Ahh, a fellow Tolkienite!! I love LoTR and The Hobbit (ahh but I’m still stuck like 3/4 of the way through the Two Towers since it’s so long. Hngh. 🥲) And- WHAT? A FELLOW DUCK PERSON??? I have quite a few ducks,…[Read more]

@elanor Whoa, that’s so cool! You must have an awesome collection!

@iluvhim18

HAHA apples are grown up cherries, that is awesome!!! oh man, I remember someone telling me I’d have sprouts grow out of my ears if I ate apples seeds, my sister avoided them like the plague and I ate all the ones I could get, just to be a rebel XD

yeah he’s not the most popular person, but he has some good stuff.

@iluvhim18

haha yeah!

Thanks! glad you like it!

@iluvhim18

HAHA oh man, I feel sorry for them… (almost)

oh and a line I just came up with yesterday for a sarcastic book character, “oh, my heartbreak.” *pauses while they whine some more, sighs, “suck it up, you’re fine, I don’t see blood or broken bones.”

Homo sapiens XDD

my siblings would just ask me what it means until I tell them.…[Read more]

@iluvhim18

haha cool! when my siblings whine, I say something similar; “you gonna live?”

if it’s like, bump their to into a corner or step on lego, i’m like “Be it a mortalizing wound?”

them: …..*silence

I’d say Rodolpho and Marcello from River of Time series. (it’s a young adult series)

Rodolpho is on the enemy side, but likes the same girl as his old friend Marcello; he kidnaps her, falls in love with her, almost marries her, then minutes before they would have been in an arranged marriage that she didn’t want to be in, Marcello shows up so he…[Read more]