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Katherine replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Whoa, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 😀 It was enjoyable to read, and I LOVE the rhyme you had going on!!!!! FANTASTIC poem, girl!!!!!! 😀
My only suggestion is that it seemed like there needed to be a period between “dreams” and “Pitch” in this part –> “shattered dreams, Pitch black“.
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Oof yeah, I haven’t been as active on here.
Like at all.Hahah that’ literally my family xD
Ooh that’s so cool!!
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh nvm I just saw that their next enrollment period is in May 🤪
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 4 months ago
Of course!
Yeah, they open registration I think twice a year. They had it open in January, so that’s when I joined. YWW is a lot like KP, but bigger and it’s like $40 a month. So, expensive, but worth it. I highly, HIGHLY recommend it. I think registration is opening again in August, and if you go to their website, I think…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 4 months ago
OOH The Authors Conservatory is awesome!!! I’m not a part of it yet, but I’ve seriously considered and researched it, and I’m planning to apply for it my last year of high school (Lord willing).
First of all: I totally get your struggle! That’s so real and you’re definitely not alone. I just joined the Young Writers…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
CONGRATS ON YOUR NOVEL!!!! I’m so happy for you! XD That is so exciting.
Hi! Welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂 You’re writing about mermaids?? How fun! I’ve dabbled in writing mermaid stories myself! I ended up dropping that project, but it was a retelling of Ariel called Rebel. (Now that I’m thinking about it,…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi! I don’t think we’ve met yet. I’m Lydia. 🙂 Welcome (very belatedly) to the KP forum! As a side note, I saw you’re a fan of J.A.’s Persuasion, and I am, too! XD I think it’s my favorite J.A. book. 😀
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Agh, WFR sounds FANTASTIC!!! I’m already rooting for Russel and Eliza. XD
Well, my WIPs are progressing minimally at the moment. However, my brain is still cooking up and mulling over scenes for my Biblical fiction series (And side books). And Simon (the Zealot). AH, I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. XD (Joining @elfwing in evil author…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic My Series Keeps Growing! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
Ah, yes, the multiplying storyline issue. I have dealt with this before, but not in an extreme form. (I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing, honestly. lol) For my fantasy WIP, I started with a trilogy (and it might have even been meant to be a stand-alone, originally… I can’t remember). Then, the writer’s brain went…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
No kidding! They really do put up with quite a bit… XD
Hmmm… I’m not sure! Helmer’s death didn’t come as a surprise for me. *cough* I may or may not have skimmed through the ending the moment I got the book in my hands to see if he was there… And when he wasn’t, I may or may not have then skimmed through the rest of the…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. and
Scoutillus Finch are now friends 3 years, 4 months ago
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin and
TheLobsterLover are now friends 3 years, 4 months ago
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Also, if you just want to skip to the second chapter to read what i wrote, you can. You don’t need to read the first chapter to understand the second chapter.
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien @gretald @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anatra23 @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @elfwing @elanor @e-k-seaver @trahia-the-minstrel @william-starkey @abigail-m @thelobsterlover @gracie-j @r-m-archer @power @kathleenramm @morgan @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-who-wants-to-bash-my-writing…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin started the topic Something Really Bad Happened guys. (not clickbait) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey yo, not-so-secret fam!
Contrary to popular belief, I actually DO write from time to time. And it’s actually REALLY GOOD. No cap. Like, Tolkien’s got nothing on me. C.S. Lewis? He came back from the dead JUST to get my autograph. And Shakespeare has been real quiet ever since I have started writing. And that’s a FACT.
Anywaaaays. I’m gonna…[Read more]
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Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin replied to the topic Help. I Just Don't Get the Appeal of the Wingfeather Saga in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for helping me understand a bit better!
Also, sorry if I sounded a bit “un-gracious” there, but I guess what I meant wasn’t anything against the author, but the story. (I’m also a terrible writer, and it would indeed be bad news for me if the notion of improvement didn’t exist). So to rephrase: If the characters, world, an…[Read more]
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ella and
Lavender Bleu are now friends 3 years, 4 months ago
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ella replied to the topic Introductions in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 4 months ago
Haha, no worries, I have the memory of a chicken. XD
Agreeeeed, spaceships make everything better.
Ohhh yum, hot cocoa is awesome. Coffee hater??? Interesting… Do you hate Starbucks? 😨XD
I’m so sorry about your studio! Actually, you remind me a lot of my sister, cuz she’s starting tae-kwon-do, and she likes korean pop…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic My Series Keeps Growing! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
XD “Author’s madness” had got to be the funniest and most relatable description I have ever read in my entire life.
This is great that you’re making progress on your series. I remember reading some excerpts you posted from it that I still remember very clearly in my mind, you also had a ‘which character are you?’ Quiz on your blo…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic Help. I Just Don't Get the Appeal of the Wingfeather Saga in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
There’s a lot of interesting points in this post and a lot of things relevant to what makes a good story. So I think its awesome that you wrote this, but sadly, I have never read the Wingfeather Saga before, so I cant really give my input here. But now I think I’m gonna have to to see what’s up with this and find…[Read more]
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