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ella replied to the topic Stars (feel free to critique mercilessly XD) in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 years, 2 months ago
Heyo!!! Ooo YAY!!! I love the title…
Oh. my. gosh. I ADORE this simile sooo much!!!
Aaahh, my eyes are watering already!! 😢
You did it again–girl, you got skills!! 😃
*cue jaw drop*
Maybe instead of “this child” again, you could write “Bridgett”? there was a little repetitiveness. So sad!…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
…and one for Emiyn and her brother, Iszac: (i’m running out of ideas, people–they’re just so fun to make!!! 😂)

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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
thanks!! haha? 😂 I didn’t know it was a unisex name… 🤔
thanks!!
Here’s one for Emiyn and her dad:

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ella replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Here’s one for the POVs (who are sisters), Aven and Emiyn:

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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 2 months ago
Oh my goodness!!! I did it on here too!!!! I’m so sorry I keep spelling your name wrong!!!!!!
Ha!!! Thank you!!!!!!! My friend said the same thing once!!! I’ve been told it’s “unusual” or “mystical” even XD I can’t imagine how your story would be with Hallie Watson instead!!!!! That’d be so strange!!! I’ve never read a story with…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
AHHHH!!!!!! Sorry I just realized I spelled your @ thing wrong!!!!!! So sorry about that!!!!!!! I’m seriously so excited to read it though!!!! MUST. FIND. TIME!!!!!!
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
OOOOOHHHH!!!! YES!!! I’d love to read it!!!!!! You can email it whenever!!! Warning some of my emails for KP are going to a different folder so if it takes me a while to see it, you’ll know why XD I’ll try to look out for it though!!!!
And thank you!!!! I really like hers turned out!!!! I don’t know what idea it gave you, but happy I…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
I LOVED YOUR CHAPTER!!!!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!!!!!!!
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Hey y'all, I'm new! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 2 months ago
Oh I agree!!! Commas are cool!!!!
Whoa!!!!! Your WIP sounds awesome!!!!!!
YES!!!!!! Gandalf is a fabulous choice!!!!!!!! I love LotR!!!!!!
WOW!!! That character sounds miraculous!!!! I wish my sister enjoyed writing!!! XD
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
@writer1216
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! IT’S FINALLY HERE!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read it!!!!!!! I promise I’ll read it as soon as I find a chance!!!!!!! I’m writing my first novel too!!! So don’t even worry about it, girl!!!!!!
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 2 months ago
Thanks!!! I’m so sorry you weren’t feeling well!!!!! I have been under the weather lately as well, but just now getting over it. I totally understand all the stuff your balancing rn, so no biggie if it will take a while!!!!!!!! I’d rather have you feel better than put you to work!!!! 🙂
@writer1216
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 5 years, 2 months ago
That is so good!! I just LOVE Newton! There are literally only three characters in all existence (and in my whole life) that I’ve ever fangirled about and Newton is so definitely one of them!! (the rarely seen fangirl side of me is internally screaming right now). 😀 😀 😀
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Lioness: Chapter One Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
It was my pleasure! 🙂
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Cast of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Personally, I’ve never had to use the Cast of Characters list (The Snow Warrior only has five immediate characters), but I think “reoccurring cast” lists are excellent:) In fact, I kind of wish I had enough characters to make a cast list.
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
Everett is such an amazing name! I like him already:)
(And actually, I LOVE spoilers! Yes, I’m probably weird but I’m the girl who looks up how a movie ends scene by scene before actually watching it XD ).
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
So . . . I’m kind of going collage crazy at the moment . . . but once I started, I just couldn’t stop!!! Please understand 🙂 Enjoy this new collage I just whipped together of a side character in my pirate series!!!!!!

I love how colorful her personality is!!!!! I’m so excited for the next collage I’ll be making . . !!!!!!!
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
*cue jaw-drop* It’s so dark and mysterious!!!!!!!! Absolutely brilliant!!!!
Ha!!! Thank you so much!!!!! Well, if you’re just dying to know . . . *WARNING LAST CHANCE BEFORE SPOILERS* . . . his name is Everett. It’s kind of simple but it kind of stuck with me and I thought it was really cute! This isn’t revealed until later.…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 2 months ago
I ADORE this chapter soooooo much!!!!! Like WHERE do I even begin????
1. YESS!!!! Your characters are soooooo awesome!!!!!Â
Deek’s probably my fav. Just saying. XD2. YES!!! I’d HAVE to keep on reading ’cause there’s just soooo many questions and I NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!
3. The pacing is PERFECT!!! I LOOOOVED this second chapter…[Read more]
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