Janellebelovedpig

@freedomwriter76

It looks so good!!

The poor boiii!! 😭

@spinner4him

Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty aweso…[Read more]

@spinner4him

My favorite character to write… do you mean characters that I’ve created and am writing?

Yep! Any character of your own creation!

I love homeschooling because I have more time to invest my energy in doing things I like to do and learning about things I enjoy.

Yeah, awesome! I would agree. 😉

As for cake or ice cream, ice cream wou…

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@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings

Oh yeah, whoops. 😅

Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉

@sarafini

Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!

@sarafini

If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]

@rae

Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!

Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*

Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…

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@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it!

I did a pencil sketch, went over it in pen, erased the pencil, and then colored it with prismacolor colored pencils.

Oh also I use a black fabercastel polychromos, it’s worth it for the money. My main brown is a caren d’ache, but the only reason I have a few of those it because I fou…

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@fernweh_grace

Cool! Can’t wait!

@calyhuge @loopylin @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 – yes freedom, Erich and Riker need to bust in soon. XD

Oh geez, i just kinda went wild and added a lot of unneeded crap, but here you go!

Tirion

“How about you two?” Felicity asked, turning to Riya and Tirion.

“Uh,” Tirion paused, watching everyone turn to look at him and Riya with eyes fu…[Read more]

@smiley

ooooh, that would be cool!!!

@sarafini

So cool! I really like it!

@fernweh_grace

Oooh, that sounds really cool!!

For sharing, you can do that on here!! Or make a new forum. Whatever ya want!

@freedomwriter76

somehow i missed your reply. XD

Yessss, I know about Inktober!!!

Sadly, I don’t think I’ll be able to do every day…however, I will enthusiastically cheer everyone on and maybe do a drawing or two! 😀

Hey that’s okay! I’ll probably get really behind, so we’ll see. 😆

(speaking of which…I need to color the drawing of Riker’s…

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@jonas

That’s a great idea! The problem is, on my google account I have, it’s my school account and the docs I make can’t be shared with anyone else that has a non school account. I will, however now post the link to my “reedsy” account, (it’s like google docs, but no one can edit or comment.

h ttps://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ Copy and paste…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Well, I’ve asked myself that question multiple times. So since it’s an allegory, I think it was needed to show that God accepts us out of many different situations and no matter what we’ve been told, we’re always loved. It also builds the romantic aspect between the two MC’s because one comforts the other during flashbacks (thought…[Read more]

@sarafini

I forgot to mention that most of the things that you’ll find wrong with this thread have already been mentioned by others and have been either fixed or the chapters deleted and replaced.

I deleted the paragraphs about the races, and fixed multiple other problems. Maybe I need to make a new thread for the new and improved WIP, lol.

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, I’m using mani/mahnith. Thanks!

@sarafini

I know you asked me to tag you, so here’s the “thread” about my current WIP! If you read through all the comments (a daunting task, and don’t do it unless you REALLY WANT TO), you will find exerpts from my novel that I have revised and/or have replaced other chapters.

Sorry this…[Read more]

@sarafini

Okay!

@janellebelovedpig

I agree that it’s the best to have your parents’ on board about the topics you write about but I just don’t really have that. For example, my mom is very sensitive to reading about sad things, so she puts herself in the character’s place when she reads my stories, and it’s just hard for her to read. Same with…[Read more]