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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok, so life has been really busy, but I should be able to write another RP tomorrow. 🙃
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, that makes sense! That’s kind of what I already have been trying to do, but you put it in a way that makes more sense, lol.
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Euodia replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 11 months ago
Awwww the Riker and Iris scene is so cute!!
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Mmm, love it. Fits their personalities very well. XD
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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Nice!!!
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Euodia replied to the topic AIO General thread (all things AIO and writing) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oooooo, I shall watch this forum… 👀
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, awesome!! Can’t wait to read it!!! 😁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 years, 11 months ago
Anybody else love fall? I love the colors, the temperature and best of all, fall=pumpkin spice lattes, pumpkin pie blizzards from Dairy Queen, pumpkin pie, apple pie, chai tea lattes…..there’s a lot of things!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
No, it’s not annoying at all! I honestly am super forgetful and just forget to check KP and stuff lol. So yeah, it actually helps a lot!
I’ll probably be leaving in May, because that’s when my subscription ends. I’ll still be on other stuff but I just want to put that money towards other things, if that makes sense. 😉
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, I get that. My parents also made the decision to not kiss until their wedding day, and it’s amazing how they were able to follow through, especially in today’s society. I think Albert’s part is fine, because he is a lot like the boys in my school, how he teases Libbie and stuff like that. So I think you should leave it in…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas got it, but if you have any more, let me know! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 2 years, 11 months ago
*Is trying to think of a character to use this on* *Doesn’t want to spoil anything in Healer/the sequel* XD
Oh btw I think I might call the sequel “Outlaw,” to fit the character sort of like “Healer” did. 😉
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
I grew up a really sensitive kid though.
Yeah, same! I used to think scenes from veggietales were scary! XXXXD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re good! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
I thought the same thing as hybridlore, lol. Otherwise, great!
That whole thing about Albert wanting to kiss Libbie and Bert actually kissing Clara made me cringe (which is a good thing!) because how awkward would that be???? AHHHH! But it’s good! I like it!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic AIO (adventures in odyssey) RP!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
OH MY GOSH I LOVE ADVENTURES IN ODYSSEY!!!!
but i probably won’t join….because I would rather just rant about Odyssey in general. So should I make a post thread where we can just “argue” about conspiracy theories, the way things “should have gone” (we’d be kind while arguing, of course, haha) or just talk about all things Odyssey?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)
It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.
Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:
Hey! So yeah, I love and write sci-fi, and I love this story!! You’re a very talented writer. I agree with everything hybridlore said – on the topic of long/short paragraphs, I think it’s a thing where people have…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Yep, @jonas got it! XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing abuse in an allegory in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
Great advice!
Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)
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Yess, the leaves, the weather, the smells, and apple pie!
I had my first apple pie yesterday! My grandma and little brother picked all our apples from our trees, and I helped make the pie (i’m not a fan of baking, but I helped because I wanted to later help EAT the pie, lol).
Lol! Ooooohhh, fresh apple pie is probably amazing… I’ve made apple crisp with fresh apples before, but usually I just get it at the grocery store. But you normally have to wait until October/November to get it there, lol.
Apple crisp is amazing! I love it, my grandma usually makes it every fall.
I don’t think we’ve ever bought a pie from the store, haha! My grandma is the type that makes EVERYTHING homemade, especially deserts. Her bread/rolls are LEGENDARY, lol.
Ohhh, gotcha! That’s awesome! Yumm, lol. Ikr, it’s just so good… I’m kind of obsessed with that kind of stuff, lol. I made apple crisp for my 12th birthday instead of cake XD
@hybridlore
I wish I would have asked to have pumpkin pie for my birthday or smthn, but I didn’t 🙁
Aughh, there’s always next year XD
Plus, you’ll probably get some on Thanksgiving… maybe?