Evelyn

@elanor

Yes, actually! I’m working on my YA Sci-Fi/Fantasy novel. I’m only at about 15,000 words so far, but I’m getting closer and closer to finishing my first draft every day.

@elanor

That’s cool! Ever defender that I’ve known has been an awesome person, I’m sure you’ll be the same! 🙂

@elfwing

True, tears are needed for some things! 🙂 I prefer to use other actions than crying, but I do need to fall back on tears for especially emotional scenes.

No problem, I love sharing my “immense” wisdom I’ve gained from my whole 14 years of life on this earth. xD

@elfwing

I’m a little late BUT I’VE COME TO HELP! *pulls out binder of writing advice*

*skims through index* Ah, here we are, showing emotions. Crying isn’t always the best way to show sadness, and it’s not just an action used to show sadness. Tears are just little packages of emotion that your body sends out when it’s overwhelmed with emotion.…[Read more]

Generally, I just release it into my brain and say “Now stay in my head until I can get to writing yo-” *POOF* “… what was I talking about?”

Or I try to write a summary or just a couple sentences about it. And then end up writing as much as I can of it before I burn out and forget about it and go back to writing my WIPs. Unless it’s an idea for…[Read more]

@elanor

Oh, sorry, I guess I should explain myself, huh? 😉

An ENFP is a Myers-Briggs personality type. Each letter stands for a trait.

E = extraverted

N = intuitive

F= feeling

P = prospecting

I highly suggest taking the test yourself to figure out your type! It can be very informative and revealing about yourself.

Link:…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

AHHHHHH!!! Thank you so much, JC, I love it! <3333

@elanor

Hello, Lilly, I’m Evelyn! I’m a 14 year old, ENFP, chocolate lover. I hope you enjoy KP! 🙂

@joy-caroline

Not sure if you’re still doing these, but I’d love one of these, if you are! 😀

My MC is Clarissa Fernwillow, she’s a 15 year old princess with long wavy brown hair and emerald green eyes. She loves reading and journaling, and often gets lost in her thoughts. Her kingdom’s colors are green and brown, and her most common themes are…[Read more]

@anika123

Alright. If you like you can copy/paste these right into the Doc.

@anika123

I would, but I noticed that when I try to comment it includes my email address, once I’m able to sign out of my Google account I’ll comment it in the Doc.

@anika123

I’m on page 4 so far and I love the story! I do, however, have a couple of concerns. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes that need to be fixed, I suggest those first. And I also suggest giving the characters’ individual voices. I can’t tell the difference between who’s speaking, thankfully this is an easy fix by developing tone…[Read more]

@elfwing

That’s great! And little kids are very impressionable, one time I convinced my little brother one time that apples were just cherries all grown up. (Don’t worry, I fixed my mistake later, I’m not that mean!)

I’ve never heard of him, but then again, I live under a rock when it comes to popular media. xD

@elfwing

Wow, you just seem to be popping up everywhere for me, aren’t you? xD

I skimmed through it and it looks great so far. Keep up the amazing work, Iris!

@anika123

I’d love to be a beta reader and provide feedback for you! I’m not sure if I’d be the best person because I don’t have anything published myself yet, but I’m getting closer and closer every day and have been writing for years.

I don’t share my email because it not only includes my full name but also my town/school name, and I’m not…[Read more]

@elfwing

I’ve got to try that sometime, they already get soooo mad at me when I ask if they died. Time to make them even more mad at me hahhaha.

They got so upset when I called them ‘homosapiens’ until they told on me to our parents and my parents explained that it just means human….

@elfwing

I actually use “mwahahah I is evil…” as well xD And another thing I say is “okie doke!” or “yeppers!” I’ll also go, “but did you die?” whenever one of my siblings complains to me. lol

@elfwing

I mean I know you because of the character discussion, I don’t think I know you in real life, but you never know! 😉

*whispers* Don’t worry, your secret’s safe with me!